FIC: "Holding on to a lie," Part 13/? (Colby/Charlie, Megan, Don, Amita/OMC, PG-13)

Aug 22, 2008 11:14

Title: "Background details"
Series: Holding on to a lie, Part 13/?
Characters: Colby/Charlie, Megan, Don, Amita/OMC.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: Discussion of rape.
Summary: Colby finds some data about Amita's therapist that should be taken into consideration.
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genre: slash

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Author Speaking paranoid_woman August 22 2008, 14:28:19 UTC
Here we get some answers, for example some data about Bob's past and what he thinks of Amita. We even get a picture of him!!! (oh well, in my head he has always looked like Jack Nicholson, with that evil face ( ... )

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Chapter Essay *snort* harknessgirl August 22 2008, 16:47:31 UTC
Hey Sweetie,

What a great chapter.

I think Bob is finally realising that Amita is not as minipulative as he believed. I wonder why Amita took a knife, I can only hope it is not for the reason I believe it may be. That is the image I had of Bob is my head.

I am glad Colby has decided to do some digging, the past on Bob is very intriguing.

Can't wait for more :-) Talk to you soon xx

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Re: Author Speaking paranoid_woman August 22 2008, 17:20:10 UTC
Yeah, Amita is not as easy as he thought she would be. I mean, she didn't even tell him about the cold pills, LOL! But she took that knife. I can't tell you what's going to happen... well, I think you know already a little bit of it, but that's just the beginning, trust me... Remember that there's still a big ? when it comes to the number of chapters this series is going to have... *shakes head, laughing*

Hehehehe, I'm glad you had pictured Bob like that. *g*

Yes, Colby is getting very worried now after what David did to him and his fight with Amita. And Bob will come back, I can tell you that. :D

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for the comment!

And by the way, we really need to talk more. I'll send you an e-mail so we can do it tomorrow... I have classes this afternoon, tonight and tomorrow morning. *headdesk*

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byrons_brain August 22 2008, 17:12:14 UTC
Oooooh the plot thickens, I'm loving this.... pyscho amita is just fantastic... looking forward to more....

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paranoid_woman August 22 2008, 17:23:24 UTC
Hehehehehe, thanks so much.

I'm glad the psycho!Amita thing is working, I love writing about her. :D

Thank you much again for the comment, hon! *hugs*

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devon99 August 22 2008, 19:04:37 UTC
He, he, that did make me smile. Jack Nicholson is SO Bob its untrue!

Another great chapter, things are really hotting up.
Why has she taken the knife? She's not going to hurt Charlie is she? Like some sort of crazy murder/suicide thing. Or maybe she's going after Colby, the major obstacle between her and Charlie....

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paranoid_woman August 22 2008, 19:40:26 UTC
Hahahahahahaa, I'm glad you think Bob looks like that!!! I always saw him that way inside my head. *g*

Of course I'm going to keep the secret about Amita's plans to myself. At least until the next chapter, LOL! ;D

From this moment I'm going to have even more fun writing this, I hope you enjoy it as well. :D

I'm so happy that you liked this, it means so much that you support my writing... I still have to read that new drabble of yours. I'll do it today or tomorrow, I can't wait!! *g*

Thank you so much!!

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charldon_eppes August 22 2008, 20:33:41 UTC
absolutely fantastic stuff. The shrink reminds me of that character in "What about Bob" where Bob does care about anyone but himself and nobody notices until everything goes horribly wrong.

The Amita character came to a cross road last chapter and now that she's decided which part she wants to take; its let to be seen how many people will become victims of hers.

I suspect that the suspense has only began to thinken but it can only make for an even greater fic.

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paranoid_woman August 23 2008, 02:44:00 UTC
OMG, what a review!!! *g*

Thank you so much for all the compliments, they're very appreciated!!! *blushes*

You're right about Amita, she came to a cross road in chapter 12. That is exactly what I wanted people to notice!! :D

Yeah, the suspense has just began. I can't tell you how fast this is going to be, but we're going to see who the victims will be very soon. *g*

Thank you so much for everything - really. You're lovely. *hugs*

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