FIC: "Silent hunt," Part 3/? (Charlie/Amita, Alan, PG-13)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: "Love gone cold."
Series: Silent Hunt, Part 3/?
Characters: Charlie/Amita, Alan.
Genre: HET.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Sometimes people realize that their love has gone cold.
Feedback: I love it. :)
Disclaimer: I do not own Numb3rs or anything related to it. But I do own the original ideas and my OCs.
Beta: The

Comments

[harknessgirl]

This was really good :-D

I love your build up to the eventual brake up of Amita and Charlie. I need to keep reminding myself that Colby wont be coming in to whisk Charlie away. This is really good sweetie, whatever you think. :0)

I don't know but I can't see Charlie getting married to anyone really I don't know I just can't really imagine it in my head.
mmm something to ponder.

Again fantastic chapter sweetie. Talk to you soon *hugs*

[paranoid_woman]

I can't imagine Charlie getting married, either. He's just not into it, he's got another priorities in his life. I'm glad you agree.

And yeah, in my head I have to remind myself that this is het and that there will be no Colby to rescue his Charlie... *sniff* But that's what slash is made for. :)

Thank you for the adorable comment, sweetie...

[mia_dcwut_09]

Me too as I read this Im like colby walk in colby walk in
when is he going to walk in *slaps own hand*
loved it woman you're the only one who can make me really feel sorry for Amita *shaking head*
I totally agree with your other note
I can't seem him marrying but who needs marriage, it doesn't change how you feel about the person.

[paranoid_woman]

Yeah... "Colby walks in, and..." *slaps herself* Nope, that's not going to happen... at least not here. ;)

I don't believe that marriage is absolutely necessary, and I agree with you that it doesn't change how you feel about the person. The issue is that Indian families have rules for their daughters and sons, and Alan's warning ("Now you'll have to marry her" or something like that) when Charlie met Amita's parents made me come up with this chapter. :)

I'm glad I can make you feel sorry for Amita. Her character has so much potential, but I think that they're not getting advantage of that in the series.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting... "Colby walks in and..." *slaps herself again* LOL

[mia_dcwut_09]

o darn it *sigh* o well
that clip made my laugh in play by play
i loved how he just goes "Ummm...i think ill have one of those cookies now"
guess what i have another idea for liz/david