FIC: "Holding on to a lie," Part 8/? (Colby/Charlie, Alan, Amita, Don, PG-13)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: "A strange illness"
Series: Holding on to a lie, Part 8/?
Characters: Colby/Charlie, Alan, Amita, Don.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Charlie becomes obsessed with the numbers, and that upsets Colby.
Feedback: I love feedback. Every comment is a cup of coffee that keeps me posting. :)
Disclaimer: I do not own Numb3rs

Comments

Author Speaking: Let the pills be tested...

[paranoid_woman]

I totally LOVED writing Colby in this chapter. I also adored writing angsty!Charlie, because, really, he's not very good at relationships, especially when they just started. *shakes head* And if numbers are involved? He has his own world, and he forgets about everything else. I'm actually glad Colby wasn't really angry, thanks to Alan's help. I love Alan... and I'm so sad that he almost fainted. But the pills have started to have a effect on hin... and they will be tested! Yay! *g*

Amita's totally playing the good girl role; but we all know she's not innocent at all... :D

Today I'm going to sign up for my next semester's classes, and I have to take my sister to a couple of places, but I'll be answering comments today, even if I go out and get back home almost every two hours. :)

Thank you for your support,

- PW.

[byrons_brain]

Oh no poor Alan, another great chapter hun... you write their relationship so well.

[paranoid_woman]

Awww... you're going to make me cry. *blushes*

Poor Alan. But hey, at least Colby's going to get those pills tested, so... ;)

Thank you SO much for the comment. *huge hugs*

[devon99]

*shakes head* Charlie, what are you thinking? If Colby was sitting on MY sofa, it would take some sort of natural disaster to distract me!!

Loved that Alan had to pull him aside to talk to him, and then he got all upset, he's so clueless!

And yay - the pills are being tested, clever Colby. Great update.

[paranoid_woman]

A natural disaster? Hell, yeah. That's what it would take us all to distract us!! *g*

Well, Alan has always had to make Charlie become aware of the things that are really important; Charlie is still so bad at the beginning of relationships. *shakes head*

Besides, Alan is worried about Colby. I don't think he would have liked to see his son hurt him. :)

The pills are going to be tested. Oh, yeah... but will that stop Amita? Of course NOT!!! *evil laughter*

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Mmmwah! *hugs*

[harknessgirl]

I sort of feel sorry for everyone in this chapter except Amita (of course). Everyone seems to be suffering at Amita's return in some way or another even if it is not with direct contact with her.

As ever you have written this beautifully, the dialogue and character emotions perfect :-D

Well done sweetie:-D

[paranoid_woman]

Hey, thanks! Of course... no one will feel sorry for Amita... for now. *g* And yes, she's making everybody suffer because of her return. *nods*

Your chapter essay made me smile a lot. I'm so glad you liked this... ♥

Thank you for the lovely comment, I appreciate your thoughts at lot! *hugs*

[shanachie13]

Yeah... Doing good, girl... Short comment cuz I need to go check your emails.

[paranoid_woman]

Hahahaa. Don't worry about it. :P

[shanachie13]

I figured that...

[paranoid_woman]

What I meant is that I know that if you're not much into slash for Colby, so I don't want to pressure you and ask you to comment on it. I'm open to people who mostly prefer het or gen or other genres over slash. :)

Besides, you know that I also write het and gen, so... :P