FIC: "Holding on to a lie" - Part 6/? (Colby/Charlie, David, Amita, PG-13)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: "Hiding the problem"
Series: Holding on to a lie, Part 6/?
Characters: Colby/Charlie, David, Amita.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Colby sees secrets everywhere, and feels that he can't help the ones he loves.
Author's note: This is set after " The Connections Series" and " Not thinking about you."
Feedback: I love

Comments

Author Speaking

[paranoid_woman]

I wrote this chapter when I went to the coffeeshop the other day... All this Colby feeling came to me, and it was good because I needed to end the David part for now, as well as the scene with Amita.

I just love it that Colby is a good friend, and I don't know why, but I can really see David in that state after what happened to him. That's weird, considering that we don't get much David time in the actual series. :)

And Charlie is still so innocent. He believes Amita, but can we blame him? She's still the little, sweet victim, he doesn't know what she has become. Plus, he used to love her, so I don't really think that he's going to realize what she's doing until it's too late. *shakes head*

Ok, I'll stop with the rambling. I'll be waiting for your thoughts.

Hugs and dirty fantasies for those who want them,

- PW.

[charleseppes]

Great chapter! I'm just confused about one thing. In the last chapter, you left it with Colby and Charlie yelling at each other...yet in this one, they aren't? Or am I confusing that with a different story? *scratches head*

[paranoid_woman]

No, no, what you're saying it's true, I noticed that. The thing is that I decided the yells to be just Colby saying that David's not all right and that he needs to get some help. I think (and I repeat, I *think* he he) I never wrote about Amita actually hearing what they were saying, just that Colby and Charlie seemed to be fighting (she heard "upset voices"). The truth is, she doesn't really know what happened, she thinks she won this time. :)

Thank you for pointing that out, I was pretty sure someone was going to do it, and it's great to have a opportunity to make it clear. *thanks you*

Thank you for the lovely comment and I'm glad you liked the chapter! :D

Take care!

[harknessgirl]

I am so glad Colby is not mad with Charlie. Thats a relief.
You are sneaky :-D(I read the comment by Charlieeppes and your reply)

This was great, Colby and Charlie are so made for each other and you showed this beautifully :-D

I am sure David will tel Colby soon what happened but I am not surprised he has not tolf any one yet, I think I would have drank 12 bottles of Vodka after what happened to him. poor guy.

See there is another reason to torture Amita with the sex toys and cannibalistic Egyptians. LOL.

Talk to you soon sweetie :-P
xx

[paranoid_woman]

Well, Colby has seen David act just like Amita, so maybe it would be good to give her a chance to try to get better, even if she is getting in the middle of Colby and Charlie's relationship. And yes, I'm sneaky, I do like to work with details, and I actually knew someone was going to talk about the end of the last chapter. *nods* However, if I made a mistake, I don't have a problem with admiting it, it's ok, I'm really learning here. :D

David is having a very hard time. But he will react, eventually. I can promise you that.

LOL Sex toys and cannibalistic Egyptians... Hahahaha. But strangely enough, it makes sense to me. *headdesk*

Talk to you soon! I'm glad you liked this! :D

*hugs*

[harknessgirl]

Yeah anyone else who reads this comment will be like what sex toys and Canabilistis egyptians ??? Crazy people LOL.

[paranoid_woman]

Yeah, TOTALLY crazy people, LOL! ♥

[devon99]

Oohh..I liked this Colby POV chapter. He's such a good friend to David, even if David is pushing him away...and I love how insecure your Colby is, and Charlie can instinctively reassure him.

Its funny, but on the show, I just see Colby as a slightly periphiral character that I can take or leave either way, (Im a real Charlie girl) but here in your fic - I adore him. Damn you Amita for upsetting him!!!

Look forward to the next chapter, although im slightly worried about whats going to happen next !!

[paranoid_woman]

I am also a Charlie girl, but after joining the savecolby community and starting writing fan fiction, I don't know, this Colby came to life in my head, and I'm doing what it seems to be good with him. I know that in the series he doesn't usually have a huge role, but I treasure the episodes in which he's given the chance to show how much potential he actually has.

To me, there are lots of things we can do with Colby. And if we add Charlie, well... there are MORE things!! *g*

Amita's evil. But we only have seen like 10% of what she's capable of. And because of that, you should be worried... *nods*

Thank you for the huge compliments, I'm glad I could give you some reason to start to love Colby. That happened to me, too! *hugs*

[devon99]

"To me, there are lots of things we can do with Colby."

He he ...naughty...Im sure we can ALL think of lots of things we can do with Colby!!!

Sends *hugs* back

[paranoid_woman]

Hahaha. Yeah, I know that sounded a little naughty, he he. LOL

*hugs back*

[mia_dcwut_09]

aww loved this chapter
so sweet
I totally agree with your author speaking comment
can't wait for more

[paranoid_woman]

I'm so happy you liked it! I got the feeling you were going to enjoy it, because it was meant to be sweet. *g*

Thank you for sharing your thoughts! Take care!! Mmwah! *huge hugs*