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FIC: "To be in control" - Part 3/5 (Colby, R, Gen)

Jul 18, 2008 10:42

Title: "To be in control" - Part 3/5
Characters: Colby.
Rating: R.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Colby remembers that he needs to buy some new clothes. ;)
Author's note: This was written for the "All About Colby" challenge at savecolby.
Feedback: I love feedback. I'd love to hear your thoughts on this one, it's been hunting me for ages. *g*
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Author Speaking paranoid_woman July 18 2008, 17:54:16 UTC

In this part we go back to the sexiness. The idea of Colby owning a motorbike came to me when my lovely beta first asked me if there was going to be a follow-up to chapter 1. That's when I came up with the general concept for every part.

I know that some of you must have thought, "Hey, Candi said NO ROMANTIC PAIRINGS. Why is this woman talking about a "she," about Colby's friend?" But hey, she was his motorbike, so it's allowed that he's named her. It's still GEN! *looks around innocently* :D

I confess that writing the part in which he changes his clothes wasn't easy, because I was trying not to make it boring, keep it sexy and keep it being from Colby's POV, all at the same time. It was a challenge, but I did it. Let's hope it works. :)

There are 2 chapters left. We're near the end and I'm already missing this series. *sniff*

I don't know why I always get this emotional when I write Colby or when Candi opens a new challenge. But I'm going to deal with it, and I'm going to do it well. *nods*

Thank you for reading and reviewing in advance,

- PW.

Re: Author Speaking shanachie13 July 19 2008, 18:01:57 UTC

Commenting that I'm printing and taking home to read... I'll get back to you later... limited internet time and as much as I want to read this... I can't take the time... *hugs*

Re: Author Speaking paranoid_woman July 19 2008, 18:10:45 UTC

Hahahaha, that's ok. I hope you enjoy this. *g*

Talk to you later, hon! I really want to hear your opinion on this! :)

Re: Author Speaking shanachie13 July 19 2008, 18:36:59 UTC

You'll get my opinion, just not sure when... I'm still at the library... but doing other things.

Re: Author Speaking paranoid_woman July 19 2008, 20:27:54 UTC

Hey, take your time, that's ok! :)

Re: Author Speaking shanachie13 July 20 2008, 18:01:11 UTC

I loved it! But I have to admit...I knew Jenny was a bike before I read it because I saw the picture... Yummy the idea of Colby is on a bike is soooo hot!

Re: Author Speaking paranoid_woman July 20 2008, 18:02:47 UTC

Heeee! Thank you! And it's ok that you knew who (or what) Jenny was, of course!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for letting me know what you think! *hugs*

Re: Author Speaking shanachie13 July 20 2008, 18:07:53 UTC

Not a problem... It was great. I do love a man with a bike! Hence the reason I love Danny so much on CSI: NY. Okay I suppose I should give my uncle his computer back...

Re: Author Speaking paranoid_woman July 20 2008, 18:12:45 UTC

Yes, give it back to your uncle, poor man... you can't help yourself, reading fan fiction is so addictive!! And we love it! *g*

Re: Author Speaking shanachie13 July 20 2008, 18:28:50 UTC

I'm sitting next to him...so when he wants to do something, he takes it from me... I took it to show my great-aunt something about my cousin's wedding and then I was like "Well, lemme check my mail..." and I haven't given it back yet. *giggles evilly* I'm gonna have to go home soon though.

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