Comments | paranoid_woman: FIC: "Holding on to a lie," Part 2/? (Colby/Charlie, PG-13)

paranoid_woman

FIC: "Holding on to a lie," Part 2/? (Colby/Charlie, PG-13)

Jun 30, 2008 10:13

Title: "There she was"
Series: Holding on to a lie, Part 2/?
Characters: Charlie/Colby, Alan
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Colby starts to wonder about Amita's plans regarding Charlie.
Author's note: This is set after "The Connections Series" and "Not thinking about you."
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genre: slash

Comments 23

paranoid_woman June 30 2008, 13:27:42 UTC

Second chapter, yay! I'm totally stressed, but as some of you know, my semester will be oficially over (if everything goes well) this Thursday night. This time, the semester has been horrible and all I want it to get it done and move on to other classes ( ... )

toomuchfandom June 30 2008, 13:37:08 UTC

Don't tell me that Amita's "Cold Pills" are something else than just cold medication!!

paranoid_woman June 30 2008, 13:39:56 UTC

I don't know, I don't know... we'll see. ;)

Does that "Don't tell me" means that you want those pills to be something else? *giggles*

toomuchfandom June 30 2008, 13:44:05 UTC

Well Amita's twisted... but I think that even she doesn't want to hurt Alan...

paranoid_woman June 30 2008, 13:45:35 UTC

Like I said, we'll see... We'll see. *evil grin*

I really can't tell you that... I want to, but I can't!! Argggghhh!

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mia_dcwut_09 June 30 2008, 16:11:18 UTC

aww i loved the last part it was so sweet and so like colby to think that
i love alan hes a great dad

paranoid_woman June 30 2008, 16:48:02 UTC

Yeah... Alan rocks! And Colby had great moments in this chapter. I love it that he's sweet and nice, as well as I love him to get all hot when he's alone with Charlie! :D

Thanks for the comment! :D

mia_dcwut_09 June 30 2008, 22:37:01 UTC

yea same here

byrons_brain June 30 2008, 18:39:17 UTC

Ooooooooh the plot thickens, what is Amita up to???

Great chapter.... I hope Amita hasn't been trying to poison Alan, I love Alan!

paranoid_woman June 30 2008, 18:44:22 UTC

She's doing her thing... but no one knows what it is, really. We'll get to know a bit about it in the next two or three chapters. :)

I love Alan too. But still, my brain works in mysterious ways, so anything could come up of this. I usually plan the whole story, but then lots of ideas get in the middle of it, and I end up changing a lot of things. For good, of course. What I want is an interesting story that causes people to get curious.

I'm glad you liked it! The plot is slowly being built up. Trust me, there will be lots of action here. :D

Thank you for everything! :D

byrons_brain June 30 2008, 20:36:41 UTC

::huggles:: you're welcome, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter....

devon99 June 30 2008, 19:02:56 UTC

Awww, how adorable is Colby in this chapter?
The image of him helping out with the housework and self consciously chatting to Alan is so sweet.
*Shakes fist* at crazy Amita...what are those "cold" pills? What is she up to?
Look forward to more.

paranoid_woman June 30 2008, 19:10:04 UTC

If Colby's adorable in my head, what can I do, except write things the way I see them? :D Thankfully, people seem to like that. :)

I mean, he still feels nervous about being around Alan and Don, because everybody is still getting used to the fact that he's Charlie's boyfriend! Although well, that's not something that they had established yet with the "boyfriend" word exactly. *nods*

Yes, crazy Amita is there. Or like toomuchfandom called her, insane!Amita seems to be everywhere!! The cold pills story will come up later, I promise. :D

Thank you very much for your comment, it's my pleasure to write more fics you can enjoy. :)