Holding on to a lie, Part 1/? (Charlie/Colby, PG-13)

Jun 24, 2008 13:48

 Title: "Return of a fallen angel" 
Series: Holding on to a lie, Part 1/?
Characters: Charlie/Colby, Don, Larry, Amita 
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: There are people who just shouldn't come back, but they do it anyways, with mysterious purposes. 
Author's note: This is set after "The Connections Series" and "Not thinking about Read more... )

genre: slash

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Author speaking paranoid_woman June 24 2008, 17:08:10 UTC
Yes, I've realized that writing down your thoughts here, at the end of the post, is better than doing it when it starts. I admire anybody who does this. :)

About the fic itself, this part has been very fun to write for me, even if Amita's back. I think the most important part of any dialogue in this chapter is the comparison Larry made between Amita and Lucifer. I don't know, it seemed very interesting to include it, and it sounds a lot like something Larry would have said.

Now, about Amita's reasons for coming back, well... some of you might have some idea if you read my other fic "Not thinking about you." Ahhh... writing fics is just so awesome!

I hope this first chapter has brought up some ideas about what's going to happen. And like I always say, it would be lovely to get to know what you think about it. :)

Thanks for your patience and your love and your coffee! Those keep me writing insanely, which is great!

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toomuchfandom June 24 2008, 17:10:22 UTC
Oh this is interesting!! And it's such a great addition to the universe you've started! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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paranoid_woman June 24 2008, 17:15:42 UTC
I giggled when I saw the word "universe." I still don't know if this is really a universe...

Well, you're the one who put this idea inside my head, believe it or not. It came up because of something you said in one your e-mails when you were betaing "Not thinking about you," and well, the idea got bigger and bigger, and then I made a video for it (I'm posting it at some point during this series, that and other video I have in mind for the end). So... thank you! :D

I'm glad you're liking this so far. I don't know how people are going to react with the fact that Amita's here again. But I guess it will be interesting to know why she returned. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting, hon! *hugs, sends you Colby too for the evening*

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toomuchfandom June 24 2008, 17:20:02 UTC
Charlie, dirty thoughts AND Colby?!

Be still my heart! *faints*

Oh sure, blame me;)

Oh and I love the new lay out too!

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paranoid_woman June 24 2008, 17:22:29 UTC
I know... You, Charlie/Colby, and dirty thoughts... I know I'm the best thing in the world for you right now. Thank you. ;)

The layout is awesome! Of course, there's the appropriate credit on my profile. :)

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kabloinko June 24 2008, 18:14:28 UTC
Amita's back.. oh oh :/ I get the feeling that she's gonna go all freaky psycho on Charlie and Colby :( Lovely to see you continuing with this, thanks a lot for sharing :)

And the new layout is kick-ass, very stylish and easy on the eyes :)

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paranoid_woman June 24 2008, 18:29:27 UTC
Thanks for the compliments on the layout, I adore it so much...

Thanks for reading and commenting, too. Tomorrow it will be 3 months since I started actually using this journal to post fics, and it's so amazing when lovely comments like yours get to my inbox.

Thank you very much for stopping here and tell me what you think, it means a lot when someone new feels interested in my writing.

About the Amita storyline... She's acting pretty normal, or at least that's what she shows to the world... for now. ;)

Be afraid... Be very afraid... *evil laugh*

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byrons_brain June 24 2008, 18:30:28 UTC
Ooooooooooh exciting.... I'm looking foreward to more... p.s. you Charlie/Colby are just adorable....

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paranoid_woman June 24 2008, 18:38:33 UTC
"Adorable." I'm so honored that you think that. It makes me so happy. I just love those two. And to be able to write about them, it's like a dream come true. :)

This series will be exciting besides sweet... Well, I like to write about all of that. And about the hotness. Yeah, there will be Charlie/Colby hotness too. :D

Thanks for the comment! I can't believe people keep reading my fics. It's like another dream come true, which is just awesome! :D

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mia_dcwut_09 June 24 2008, 18:31:32 UTC
uhh
tension cant wait for more
i like larry's comparison
man colby I guess the little green monster gets the best of everyone

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paranoid_woman June 24 2008, 18:35:56 UTC
You're right. That little monster... He he.

Larry's comparison came from the Heavens to my head. And it defined the chapter's title. I'm glad you liked it! :D

There's so much more to come. I still can't wait to write it! There will be at least one more chapter this week (or I hope so) and more on the next week. :D

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mia_dcwut_09 June 24 2008, 18:44:12 UTC
great ill be waiting for them

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