Life Flashing - Chapter 1

[papyrus_quill]

Okay folks, here's the first chapter in its entirety, with new stuff added and so on. Be warned for spoilers for the new TF Movie. Story's told from Jazz's POV.

Comments

[hunterblues]

Knowing what's going to happen (if this is more than slightly Movie-related) makes that order a hard one to read.

Love it anyway. You seem to have Jazz the Movie character down pretty good. Guess all those showings did you good.

Whirlwind, who also loves your new icon. Didn't take you too long, did it?

[papyrus_quill]

Nope, didnt take me long at all. You're welcome to use it.

All those screenings, and still going for them, lol. Its purely for fic research, I swear! I need to go observe Jazz more and take notes. How funny would it look, sitting there and taking notes while watching the movie.

[darkfire_blade]

Egads you really have these characters down. I wonder when Jazz is going to pull out the hip gangster side of him that he flashes at Sam later in the movie?

Gotta love the interaction between Ratchet and Ironhide. Those two crack me up. And Optimus, you have him down as the ponderous responsible leader that he is. Man, after reading that order from him to Jazz, you gotta wonder what's running through his head after Jazz's death.

Great job and keep it up!

[papyrus_quill]

Soon. Very soon. I have the perfect explanation for all that you've asked.

[desertcat87]

I love the foreshadowing here, Jo! And I agree with the others- I might have seen the movie only once thus far- but your characters are spot on. P.S. Hide and Ratch are hilarious! I can't wait to see where this all goes either. Great start!

[l_shades]

*chortle* Like the others, much love for Ratch' and 'Hide! You've got the characters down-pat and the story looks like it's gonna be a blast!