What is worst - Jongyu [1/1]

[mariposa02]

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Comments

[kim_ri]

holy shit if you haven't told me that english wasn't your first language, i honestly would've thought you were born in the US and lived here all your life
.____.
this was so good i loved it! Jongyu isn't my OTP but it's one of my faves and asdfjkl; this is so sad and sweet :(
cheating is never a good thing... especially when it's a one sided love. It's so heart breaking to see onew getting hurt over something stupid that jjong's doing ><
anyways wonderful fic bb ^^b
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[mariposa02]

wow. thank you very much.
I seem to have a knack for Jjong hurting Jinki but I'm glad you liked it
thank you so much ♥

[onewconditions]

:c This is really quite beautifully written. I've never thought of putting Jonghyun with Jinki, but it somehow works. There's a lot of pretty emotion too. Well done. (:

[mariposa02]

Thank you very much :D

[justangel]

ASDFGHJKL I shouldn't have clicked the link ;_;
No, I'm by no mean saying that the fic is bad. It's quite the opposite. It got into me, made me mirroring Jinki's feeling.
Still, this is one good work. I wouldn't have thought JongYu would be this...good.

Thank you for sharing!

[mariposa02]

awww sorry >.<
but thank you very much for liking it♥ and reading and commenting ;)

[volatileflame]

omg~ this was so beautiful and heartbreaking ;^;

[mariposa02]

thank you XD

[axel1409]

This is good though it's a little heartbreaking to see Jinki so hurt, so broken by Jonghyun. A forbidden relationship, especially when it's a onesided love and involving only pleasure is always cruel when one of them wants to voice out a break up.
You've written it well, portraying the emotions of Jinki, being the one in love but can never voice out his feelings to Jonghyun.

[mariposa02]

Thank you very much I'm glad you seem to have enjoyed if even if it's kind of heartbreaking (I couldn't help it this was what came to my mind when I read the quote -.-)
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