Kidnapping time - jongyu [1/1]

[mariposa02]

 

Comments

[volatileflame]

beautiful <3
and the song works well with it (love that song).

just wanted to point out though:
Jinki gins back, his eyes forming into half moons and he runs a hand through his hair, the other leaning on the cabrio’s door. Jonghyun fixes his gaze back on the road, but reaches a hand out to touch Jinki’s calf and the elder intertwines they fingers, the smoothness of Jonghyun’s skin making butterflies flutter in his stomach. ~ 'grins' and 'their'

[mariposa02]

lol yeah I edited it^^ (I wrote it in a rush sorry >.<)
but I'm glad you liked it and thank you very much for pointing that out ;)
♥

[yolseo]

that made me smile. :3 it`s beautiful. ♥

[mariposa02]

thank you very much I'm glad you liked it :D

[itachibana13]

ooh, i really like this! i love the simplicity of the event and how the details are specific and very pretty. also, rocketeer! i love that song ): oh, i also like how it's not completely focused on jonghyun. there are descriptions of onew too, and the transition between the two boys is done well. again, this is really nice, i like it!

[mariposa02]

I'm glad you liked it ♥
thank youuuuu

[vsays]

let's fly-i-i-i-i~ oh oh here we go where we stop nobody knows

although i dont ship jonghyun/onew, this was lovely and I love this song to pieces so kudos to you! :)
and the very last line: and sometimes he wishes he could kidnap time is soooo great I love it!

[mariposa02]

thank you for reading it , though you don't ship Jongyu^^
I'm glad oyu liked it ♥