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DC: Hearth and Home - Bruce/Clark

Jul 06, 2010 00:34

Title: Hearth and Home
Pairing: Bruce/Clark
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: This story is based on the DC Comics universe, its characters, and its situations, none of which I own.
Summary: Clark’s belongings start appearing in the Manor. Alfred muses.

Master Bruce had been seeing Superman for two months before it started happening.

( At first, it was just a toothbrush. )

dc: bruce/clark

Comments 40

megamom2 July 6 2010, 11:07:10 UTC

morethansky July 7 2010, 08:27:33 UTC

Thank you! I've always adored unconventional narration styles, so I thought this would be fun to attempt.

gogglehead84 July 6 2010, 11:37:07 UTC

Aww, that was wonderful. I liked the way Clark gradually began making himself a member of the mansion lol.

morethansky July 7 2010, 08:28:09 UTC

Thanks! I thought it was just so Clark to not want to move too fast with Bruce and risk pushing him away.

quiltdiva July 6 2010, 14:29:20 UTC

Your story is wonderful! Alfred's point of view always has special charm, and you worked magic with it. The boys are so sweet aren't they? You put so many little tidbits in there- the spooning, rumpled suits, photos, but the smiles are always the clincher! Love it- hope you write more!

morethansky July 7 2010, 08:31:20 UTC

I'm delighted that you noticed all the details and very honored that you think I managed to capture Alfred's POV. I had a fun time trying to say a lot about Bruce and Clark's relationship without directly showcasing it. Thanks for reading!

(And don't worry, I'm definitely planning on writing more for this amazing pairing!)

saavikam77 July 6 2010, 15:05:13 UTC

Awwww!! This was just wonderfully sweet. :D

I adore how Alfred is totally aware of how things are changing with Clark and Bruce, and not at all surprised when they announce Clark is moving in. ^___^

*loves*

morethansky July 7 2010, 08:32:15 UTC

Of course not, Alfred sees and knows all. ;)

Thanks for reading!

hitokaji July 6 2010, 15:15:08 UTC

Awwww-- this is such a sweet story, especially when it comes from Alfred, it's ten times warmhearted! :)
I love the way you describe how they're together through Alfie's eyes.
Thank you so much for sharing this, hon. It really makes my day.

morethansky July 7 2010, 08:34:02 UTC

Thank you for reading! I love seeing Alfred acting all aloof and Alfred-like in front of other people but being so happy for Bruce behind the scenes. And I think that sometimes, relationships need to be assessed from an outside perspective -- and who better to do the job than Alfred?

I'm honored to have brightened your day! :)