In the Wrong Pt 8

May 28, 2010 22:06

Title: "In the Wrong" 8/10
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Warning: Mild swearing, some language not suitable for children. Hell this whole fic isn't suitable for children.
Summary: Seungri tried so hard. So why did it feel that no matter what happened he always ended up in the wrong ( Read more... )

seungri, tabiri, fanfiction, gri, angst, g-dragon

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griluvisvip May 29 2010, 03:15:26 UTC
SPOT!!!!!!! Ninja skillz baby :D

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papersanguine May 29 2010, 03:18:22 UTC
Holy frick! You are soo good!

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griluvisvip May 29 2010, 03:34:52 UTC
*facepalm* DAMNIT JIYONG!! WHY!? ARGH THEY WERE SO CLOSE!! SO GOD-DAMN CLOSE!! STUPID STUPID JIYONG!! WHY CAN'T YOU JUST LET HIM IN!? FOR THE SAKE OF BIG BANG!? THAT'S A LOAD OF CRAP AND YOU KNOW IT JIYONG!! If it was really about Big Bang Jiyong wouldn't be running around like a self-pitying misunderstood teenager and making everyone else MISERABLE!! The very fact that he's pushing Seungri away and treating him like DIRT is the very reason everyone else is MISERABLE. IF he's BROKEN AND MESSED UP then the only medicine for that is SEUNGRI LOVE!! WHY CAN'T HE SEE THAT!? I swear to Buddha and on my dog's grave that if Jiyong doesn't stop Seungri from leaving, and Big Bang breaks up because of this, I will reach through my computer and strangle him myself. *sniffle* My poor Riri. He doesn't deserve this Jiyong! HE DOESN'T DESERVE THIS!! YOU'RE BEING UNFAIR!! Oops there goes my Seungri bias again ( ... )

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papersanguine May 29 2010, 03:53:28 UTC
Dude, i so love your replies! They help me decided how much of a bastard i want ji to be in the next chapter. I actually scaled him back a little because i didn't want to you commit murder for Riri. :) Thanks so much for sticking with this fic! I promise(hope) it'll be worth it!

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griluvisvip May 29 2010, 04:07:16 UTC
Hehehehe glad to know you love my replies as much as I love reading this fic :D I'm definitely going to stay with this fic to the very end. BTW I love how you used their song Tell Me in this fic. Actually, I'm writing a one-shot right now and I'm using the same idea XD Use the song to tell an entire story. But back to the topic at hand, Jiyongie better make things better for Riri otherwise I just might commit murder for my panda baby boy. *shakes fists angrily at Jiyongie*

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papersanguine May 29 2010, 05:53:23 UTC
Oh, I'm really excited to read that! I think that song is so cool. When i frist heard it i thought it went "don't tell me goodbye" and honestly i wasn't that wowed. Then, I gave it a listen and read the translated lyrics and was completely WOWED! It's not often you hear a song from the person who is on the jerk-side of the realationship asking the other person to leave for their own good. :) I wish everyone would write a fic with that song as a refrence, but then again, i do LOVE angst. Haha, now i'm just rambling on!

Oh, and don't worry,bb Ri's got his time coming up soon!

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griluvisvip May 29 2010, 06:05:27 UTC
lol oh babe believe me, angst is my crack XD I just love it. And when I get around to posting my fic, I hope you'll use your ninja skills and be first to comment :D I know what you mean about the song though. They lyrics just speak to me. It reminded me of a song by Lee Seunggi called Let's Break Up. The lyrics were along the same lines, and the meaning was the same. I wish everyone would write a fic with that song as reference too. But not everyone loves angst as much as we do bb. 'Tis a sad fact. I mean I love all the other genre's out there, but angst is just so...<3 XD I can't even find the right words for it XD

*points finger at Jiyongie* YOU BETTER MAKE THINGS RIGHT JIYONGIE!! I'm warning you!! *huggles (and Seungri) you for being so awesome and angsty* <3

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papersanguine May 29 2010, 06:35:46 UTC
OH wow, i hope so! I don't think i've ever been first on the list! I always find out about fics too late! I think it's cause i must be in a different time zone here than everyone else cause I find most fics get posted when I'm sleeping. It's like 1:30am here now, so i should be in bed but i'm just lazing on my computer trying to think of icons to make but LJ is being a bitch and not letting me upload any!!

I agree though, I love the angst! Every so often a need a little fluff or crack so as not to get suicidal or something, but I could live with my angst GRI fics and be totally happy. :)

::ahem:: anyway, I'm really excited for your fic!

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griluvisvip May 29 2010, 06:49:10 UTC
It's like 11:40, almost midnight for me so there's like a three hour difference between us. If need be, I shall personally reserve you a spot :D

Lol, great minds think alike. angst is what keeps us going. crack/fluff is what keeps us on track XD. Such is the truth behind our life of GRi fandom babe XD.

I'm excited for my fic too XD I'm almost, almost done. Hmm...shall I give you a sneak preview? "Because as much as you hate him for hurting you when all you've ever done is love him, the last thing you would ever want to do is leave him alone in this cold, unforgiving world. As much as he hurt you, you still love him. Like a fool, your wounded heart still calls out for him even though his words still ring in your ear as clearly as the lyrics that fill your car on this bleak, depressing day."

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papersanguine May 29 2010, 17:06:40 UTC
::fans self:: Oh my, that angst went straight to my head! Now I'm REALLY excited!

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griluvisvip May 29 2010, 17:58:04 UTC
::fans you with giant banana leaf fan:: :D

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