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in with the tide

Mar 14, 2016 23:09

title: in with the tide
rating: g
wordcount: 2,665
merpuppy!au based on keuroket's merpuppy jongin.
a/n: a continuation of the merpuppy drabble i wrote exactly one month ago for valentines day, fish are friends, not food. jongin is a puppy who turns into a merpuppy when he touches water.

forjumpix ♡

happy white day!

( joonmyun often says he's lucky to have a puppy with so much love in his heart, but chanyeol just thinks he's lucky to have so many people to love in his life. )

chanyeol/kai, group: exo

Comments 9

asdfghjkriss March 14 2016, 16:31:17 UTC

OMG OMG this is so precious. merpuppy!nini is so cute help I'm dying. and chanyeol is so scared that he'd lose jongin. MY HEART.
oh I have a question here, how old is jongin? and chanyeol? because jongin must be so tiny to climb up junmyeon chest?

smallorbits March 14 2016, 17:07:59 UTC

oh i never really thought about that. maybe jongin is 5 and chanyeol is 7? but do puppy hybrids age differently? do they have a lower maturity level and plane of consciousness? are they tinier than normal humans? #askingthehardquestions

i like to think that eventually jongin gets a growth spurt and so does chanyeol and one day joonmyun wakes up like WOAH these tall hovering dog hybrid teens geez
but thank you!! i wrote this whole thing just based off keuroket's fanart so jongin is as tiny as the fanarts are

eoryndal March 15 2016, 23:34:12 UTC

"chanyeol, i want to go home," jongin says, slipping his hand into chanyeol's and squeezing it lightly.

chanyeol yips, feeling alarmed. "don't leave me, jongin, please.

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But merpuppy Jongin bathing has to be the cutest thing in the world. ((The only thing cuter is maybe possibly perhaps the fact that Chanyeol excitedly runs the water for him))

And you should write tall hovering dog hybrid teens, just saying :3

smallorbits March 16 2016, 02:42:46 UTC

you should write tall hovering teen hybrids hahaha i didn't think much about this au beyond those few fanarts but now i kinda want to expand it.

SQUEAAAAAALIIIINGGGGGGGG!!! jumpix March 16 2016, 04:22:28 UTC

"i'm going to protect jongin," chanyeol promises, keeping a hand over jongin's back. "i'll keep him safe forever."

OMFG DSFJDGDF I'm I'm…crying ;////; ♡ This is sooooo beautiful and you, youuuu gave it to me for the white day …AASFSDGF -dies-
I'm so happy I'MMMM Happy ♡♡-runs and jumps of joy-.

Really ;; I didn't expect this. THAAAANK YOUUUUUUU, HUN! dksjhfksdjfds ♡

Ahhh, I was reading like "ahhh! ohhhh! this is sooo cute! arghh Jongniniiii, Chanyeol -dies-" I love every word on this and the story and everything. Thank you, I'll give you something for the White Day too -with delay but love-.

-Smooches- ♡♡♡

kaihanbitches March 18 2016, 09:52:40 UTC

ggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhnnnnngggggggggg im so sad that this is so cute and not long enough
i really enjoyed chanyeol's and jongin's dynamics and their subtle character developments

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kolekacang January 17 2017, 21:52:34 UTC

UHM THIS IS SO CUTE!! Also unique concept im living!!!

I love the whole jongin was found by junmyeon by the ocean part too? I know its so small but its rly interesting haha

And when cy cried oh my gosh i just wanted to wrap my arms around him. They sound so cute i wanna keep them. Cn i? Please?

ANYWAY amazing job author!! This was rly sweet and i rly enjoyed reading it~

smallorbits January 18 2017, 17:14:56 UTC

huhu thanks! this is an au i quite like and would love to explore more some day *^*