Fic: Who's Zoomin' who

Jul 22, 2011 10:50

Part Two

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8D lady_orlean July 22 2011, 11:11:11 UTC
I don't think I can find the right words at the moment.
All I can think of is... *Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

Sorry, I just... yeah...
I love this!

*lol*
And Andy convincingly treathing Miranda with a deo as a pepper spray was priceless. *gg*

And thanks for the epilogues! XD

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Re: 8D pantone462 July 22 2011, 14:16:03 UTC
Thank you!

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perks123 July 22 2011, 12:02:52 UTC
This is a wonderful story. The dialogue is briskly paced. You captured Miranda's "snarkiness" perfectly. Once again, Miranda gets the upper hand:) And great bit about her terrible driving.

Looks like the tables were a bit turned on poor Andy.

Definitely a re-read for me. Thanks!

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pantone462 July 22 2011, 14:16:29 UTC
Thanks, I love writing Miranda!

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flyhiwithme2 July 22 2011, 12:17:47 UTC
What an awesome story! Andy's sleep deprivation made her a little slow on the uptake, but it did get her into the car in the first place. What a nice weekend, hope yours is as eventful.

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pantone462 July 22 2011, 14:17:31 UTC
Eh, well, I do envy Andy on her weekend...

Thanks for reading!

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marygriggs July 22 2011, 12:47:26 UTC
A great story for this heat wave. Thanks for sharing!

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pantone462 July 22 2011, 14:18:45 UTC
Thanks! I actually started writing it for last year's heat wave and if it weren't for bargara_b I doubt I'd ever finish it...

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raiderl July 22 2011, 12:51:11 UTC
What a wonderful story! Hot and funny, great read!

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pantone462 July 22 2011, 14:18:59 UTC
Thanks!

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