"FREEDOM"

[doppelgangerqaf]

TITLE: "FREEDOM"
AUTHOR: doppelgangerqaf
BETAED BY: positive_pat (edited)
WORD COUNT: 452 words.
WARNING: R for language and graphic description; suicide theme.

Comments

[patheticgal]

Nakakalungkot naman!! Pero totoo!
(Sa abot ng utak ko,) parang walang mali sa grammar, o tenses mo - humble mo talaga.
Alam mo minsan naisip me na rin yan kaya lang masakit, gusto mo yon wala me mararamdaman, tuloy-tuloy lang ang tulog me na wala ng gisingan!!
Ano ba yan. Sige na nga, bye for now.
Ingat

[doppelgangerqaf]

Hey! Salamat sa comment. Pasensiya ka na kung matagal ang reply ko...

Ingat lagi!

*Dops

[starlightbj]

It's very cool to read some original writing of your's hon. You're very talented - and I'm not just saying that cos i'm your friend. Your writing is poignant and thoughtful and emotive.

I will definitely buy your novel when you finish it. :D Yes you will write one.

It's nearly a year since my friend committed suicide so this writing was a little difficult to read but was very 'real'. I love the 'Freedom' at the end - that's how I like to think of my friend now - free of his worldly troubles and torment.

*hugs you tight*

[doppelgangerqaf]

Hi Star! I don't know why I didn't reply to all the comments on this post... I guess I was scared. I didn't think I'd get some positive feedback. Wow, thanks a lot for your confidence in me. I need that...

Thank you so much for reading this. It really means a lot to me.

HUGS!
*Dops

[aboyslove]

Hi. you dont know me here on Lj but I had to say that I thought it was a beautiful interpratation.

There are very many painful things in life and death really is freedom .

comming from some one who has seen death, it was realistic.

also ::

I like you writting style. It is different. I think ones writting style is ones own way of life. The way we think and they way wee see things as an individual.

I will look forward to reading more from you actually. you have definitly peaked my intrest.

Heimeko !?!

[doppelgangerqaf]

Hi there! Thank you so much for your kind words. I have avoided this post because I didn't think I would get any positive response; it made me very happy to know that you liked this piece.

I hope that you will like my future pieces :O)

*Dops

[ryosato]

Uh. Well written, but 'suicide' warning would be good.

[doppelgangerqaf]

Thanks dude :O)

*Dops

[sjmpets]

the was really wonderful.

[doppelgangerqaf]

Thank you!

*Dops