A Friendly Plea for Help
Sigh. It's come to the point in this fic where I've been staring at it for three bloody weeks now and I'm still getting positively nowhere. The smut is coming out forced, which is not something I've ever had a problem with before. I think it's because I'm still on the fence about this entire effing story, much less the way the sex comes about. It's annoying and I'm nearly ready to give up on the whole thing, except that I think the parts that are written are actually good and I'd like to try to salvage this bit of nonsense that had me so inspired in the first place. This is a plea for help and advice.
Is anyone out there in the Sherlock fandom willing to take a look at this behemoth and tell me where exactly I went so horribly wrong?
Is anyone out there in the Sherlock fandom willing to take a look at this behemoth and tell me where exactly I went so horribly wrong?