Hey everyone! So, I have a quick fic to share with everyone... It's the first one I've ever written, and I'm really excited to share it! I've always wanted to write my own fic, but I've never been able to find the inspiration to do it. Then, at like 5 am, it just sort of struck me, and I couldn't let the idea get away! It's actually kind of
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Haha, but I like that lame joke! And to be honest, I didn't even get it until you pointed it out ^^;; Haha but yeah, I hadn't seen a fic like this before, so I thought it would be really interesting to try it out and see how it would go!
Yeah, I know... Sorry about that >.< The main point of this piece was the whole fanfiction-in-a-fanfiction plot device, so I had to sacrifice a bit of Gary's character in order to make the rest of it work. I couldn't see a way to make this happen without Gary apologizing. I mean, I did try to include the background of it where Gary was being a jerk to Ash, so hopefully that helped a bit. I've read other Palletshipping fics where Gary isn't always a total douche, so I didn't feel too bad making him this way in my fic xD ( ... )
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I've only studied English in school and so on. I'm actually a bit nervous every time I speak with someone whose native language is English ^^"
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...and sorry for the late response... -.-"
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And you're welcome! :) You deserve praise on your writing haha, and I am more than happy to give it ^^
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Noooo, I've been busy... and lazy.... normal me, to put it shortly. Kjgkldsjgklsw. |D
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And yeah I get your point about Gary's character and I don't think it's a bad thing he's a bit softer comparing to what I'm used to. 8) And yes I could sense it from the text, that you've been through these things I mean.
Yup, I meant just that. The kissing scene was great in my opinion. It would've ruined the atmosphere if it turned out something more. I mean, who jumps straight into bed after confessing a crush, anyway? I wouldn't. :'D
Kissing is always damn hard to write about!
Oh no, I didn't mean your writing is bad at all! :D Actually, I guess it's just some kind of a stupid preconception, but I've gotten used to some US people write ... umm... let's say unclearly 'cause they think everyone knows their language anyway. I don't know if there's any sense in what I'm saying, but well, even I'm not sure what I'm trying to tell... The point is, you write very well :D
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