Comments | paleogymnast: The Sword of Stars: Chapter 2, Part 1 (J2 AU, NC-17 Fic)

paleogymnast

The Sword of Stars: Chapter 2, Part 1 (J2 AU, NC-17 Fic)

Jul 23, 2010 21:58

j2, first time, au, rps, angst, sword of stars, jensen'spov, hurt/comfort, nc-17, bigbang, jared'spov, fic

Comments 5

keerawa July 25 2010, 00:05:01 UTC

I'm enjoying this! This sentenceconfused me, though. Jared’s obligation to punish Jared and his insistence that Jared become his friend-Jared told it all. Are some of the 'Jared's meant to be 'Jensen's?

paleogymnast July 25 2010, 00:06:50 UTC

Yes!! That should be Jensen!! :) I'm fixing it right now! Thank you so much for catching that!! :)

slash_kitten August 22 2010, 19:35:35 UTC

I'm really enjoying this fic on all levels, but nothing made me squee like you counting your years in A.F. - Brave New World FTW!

lycaness September 1 2010, 14:44:28 UTC

Ooh, and this has just become so much more interesting. What a twist about Jensen's past and Jared's reason for being there. This is an amazing world you've created, I can't wait to read more.
Sorry it took so long to finish this chapter, I haven't been well.

paleogymnast September 1 2010, 15:09:18 UTC

*hugs* Don't worry about rushing to finish it!! :D Just enjoy!! Hope you feel better. Very glad you're liking the story!! :D