Title: The Big Man and the Villager [Unnatural History]

[pairatime]

Title: The Big Man and the Villager

Comments

[andienook]

HOLY HELL!!!!!

I love everything about this fic. everything. I'm so happy you did this. Just too hot. lol Henry's a lucky guy. ^^

I loved "You fell over, and I didn't know that was possible."

I'm glad that I inspired you (because you took it in the exact direction that it was going in my mind.) and even more glad I said I wanted to read it.

Does that mean there will be more? That would be amazing.

[pairatime]

You enjoyed it I take?

I've glad you liked it and yes Henry is very luck but so is Jasper

that was one of my favorite lines

I'd glad you inspired me too

yes, I really need to get a different story done first but yes there will be more

[andienook]

awesome. ^^ Good luck with your other story. <3

[pairatime]

thanks, and there will be more Henry and Jasper the Big Man

[kathrynew30]

Ahhh!!I loved this! Like everything about it, it felt so in character and just right.

So you have to continue with this story.

Man I am so glad that the Hesper fics are starting to grow, because I love this pairing.

[pairatime]

I'm really glad it felt in character, with only three out so far that's my biggest fear, it hard to get a feel for them yet but I try

I will, very soon

I like this pairing too they're so cute together

[riot_fox311]

Omfg. This is awesome. I just- I don't even- Uh- More please? Seriously. I was a little skeptical about this premise in the setting of this show's universe, but damn if you didn't just blow that right out of the water. I'm seriously glad to read those comments down there that say there is more in store for the future! Thanks so much for sharing!

[pairatime]

Yes there is more I've even started the next part but I'm not going to get it done quite was fast as the first part.

And yes I wanted to make the D/s work in Unnuatural History and not just have Jasper slap some leather cuffs on Henry and pull out a flogger or something…but if we ever do a kink meme maybe…sorry back to the point, Jasper and Henry are two teens that have never done anything like this before so they aren’t going to move fast they don’t know enough to move fast and I want to make it as real as I can. I’m very glad it’s working so far

[gingerberrycat]

ok, so wow.
i'm catching up on UH fics and just got to this series.
i'm gonna go wish that some progressive hs show decides to get inspired by this and incorporate it into its characters, cuz it's like the perfect first time D/s fic.

[pairatime]

thank you I'm glad you liked it and I hope you liked the rest of the series, I'll have a new part out in the next day or so