Title: Count down to dinner [Shelter]

[pairatime]

Title: Count down to dinner
Word Count: 1,594
Challenge: shelter_diner Holiday Fest 2009: Shaun prepares Christmas dinner for his new family/ and smallfandomfest Round 6, Shelter: Zach/Shaun, Christmas with Shaun’s family

Comments

[girloftheburbs]

Nice job, it was fun seeing them in a family/holiday setting, with Gabe's humorous input. :) I did the same thing with the turkey, lol.

[pairatime]

the turkey was fun to write

[figaro23]

I really enjoyed this! Great dialogue, and perfect moments between Zach and Shaun. My favorite is the dough kneading in the kitchen--beautiful moment.

[pairatime]

kneading dough with someone you love is just wonderful. I'm glad you liked it

[pairatime]

thank you, I like Gabe he's nice to play with

[idealuk]

Aaron and Christian. LMAO. Sweet story.

[pairatime]

half way into it I realized that two of my guest were Aaron and Christian so I kept it. I'm glad you liked it

[idealuk]

LOL. Yeah ... I'm just wondering how THOSE friendships began.

[pairatime]

that could be fun to write some day but I'm thinking Aaron, he's friedly guy

[samueljames]

Love the teasing with Gabe and Shaun wanting to try being a parent. The countdown to dinner is a lovely way to link all the different moments.

[pairatime]

Shaun's going to make a great dad.

I'm very glad you liked it

[samueljames]

I really think he'd be an awesome dad because he's so good with Cody in canon.

[pairatime]

they are great in cannon