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Breathe Me In. - Drabble (Jaechun)

Mar 03, 2009 12:58

Title: Breathe Me In.
Author: kayjayloves
Word Count: 92
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yoochun
Band: DBSK/THSK/TVXQ
Genre: drabble
Rating: PG
Warning: none
Disclaimer: Don't own these guys, just my interpretations of them.

Synopsis: jaejoong cuts deeper than any razor; he's honed sharp shards

Comments: written to the_audio_mess Playlist # 8, using I'll Be Yours by Placebo.

( a pact to make it real. )

challenge; the audio mess, pairing; jaejoongxyoochun, fandom; dbsk

Comments 8

quiet_heartache March 3 2009, 20:39:49 UTC

souls mates ftw
'breathing hampered, he smiles crooked honest lies.' - oO. like.

thankee

kayjayloves March 3 2009, 23:03:24 UTC

yes xD thank you!

♥ for the comment!

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kayjayloves March 3 2009, 23:03:10 UTC

i believe we've talked about this, but jaechun has this certain feel to them, which i really like to write (and thus attempt at explaining). in fact, they fit that whole audio mess playlist so well because of the vague disturbing, too close relationship vibe it has going through it.

thank you for the lovely comment ♥

lolol you read this on msn before. xD i wrote it a bit ago, been biding my time

siriusmoonpup March 4 2009, 00:22:15 UTC

“i’m everything to you.” and yoochun can’t find a reason to disagree.

he breathes in.

I'm in love with that line bb <3

i love your writings T.T so much meaning in a few words <3333

*pokes* how do you get your text to align in the middle bb? o.o

pandapples33 March 4 2009, 01:26:01 UTC

his eyes are star-crossed. “i’m everything to you.” and yoochun can’t find a reason to disagree.
he breathes in.

breathe in poison and lets out lies.

jaechun ♥ is done with one heart, a half from each and they're complete. <33

sungie86 March 4 2009, 04:53:40 UTC

oooh intriguing. compelling, even. there's a lot going on in so few words. i like how it's distilled, strong.