Another - Oneshot (Yunjae)

[kayjayloves]

Title: Another 
Author: kayjayloves 
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Yunjae
Band: DBSK/TVXQ/THSK
Genre: angst
Rating: G
Warning: none
Disclaimer: Don't own these guys, just my interpretations of them.

Synopsis: It’s another crack; it’s breaking hearts or revealing them.

Comments: Written 'cause of My Destiny, which has been stuck in my head for a couple days

Comments

[simply_strange]

Have I ever told you, that I'd kill for your writing style? It's so delicate in this really lovely way and oh my gah. I just feel like going "Oooh shiny!" with the words you use. The first line is gorgeous, and "cigarette emotions" is a beautiful phrase. Great work, but when do you not write great work, really.

♥!

[kayjayloves]

LOL. I just feel like going "Oooh shiny!" with the words you use that's like a huge compliment, honestly xD Waah, thank you so much hun <3

♥ for the comment!

[snowflakes_nad]

*exhales*
*is incoherent*
<3

[kayjayloves]

*hands words*? <3

♥ for the comment!

[graveyardgrin]

Do write more Yunjae, you write them so well (: ♥

[kayjayloves]

Tbh, they're one of my favorite pairings, I don't know why I haven't written more of them o:

Thank you! ♥ for the comment!

[yomi_chan305]

"Yoochun is biting the tips off candies, feeding the rest to Jaejoong."
Wow that whole paragraph was just like, omg deja vu, but especially that bit.

"look how good at acting we’ve gotten. look, we love you" *sings* "weeeee love you..." it's sad to think that they might act like that but at the same time, it's very real.

"what, Yunho is thinking, what now, i’m tired, joongie, dammit."

&

"i’m tired too, i’m so tired. and maybeiloveyou"

I love how these bits just flow together, and how, you didn't use any quotations and such. It just gets the meaning across so much nicer. xD

♥

[kayjayloves]

Wow that whole paragraph was just like, omg deja vu, but especially that bit.
Haha, I think that's one of my favorite parts too, because it feels so real (which, makes sense xD)

Ah, I'm glad you liked it! you all ready know but I actually do like this piece myself xD

♥!

[firelights]

Hey, just dropping by with a short comment because I don't have much time, but - I like the feeling of this, kind of subtle-painful, you know? It hurts, but it's nice. ♥♥♥ I hope you're doing okay.