✈.002 collection of happiness; three drabbles

[paintingseas]

collection of happiness
g; 400 words total
three onew/taemin drabbles to bring sunshine into the world.
note: i signed up for seouldout and i guess this is just me practicing. hope you all enjoy them! for me, ontae is like my own personal sunshine.

Comments

[salted_taiyaki]

damn it can't read right now but i'll def. get back to this
spottt ♥ so much ontae i can't even lskf

[salted_taiyaki]

all right time to comment
ughh oh my god they were all SO adorable. i enjoyed the first lines of each drabble; and i tend to look at them with much interest, because i love strong beginnings. and each one was so perfect lkjsdf gah, i'm just, idek
i'm dying from the cuteness of it all.
the first one might be my favorite though ♥ typical onew.

[paintingseas]

thank you very much for this! if you don't mind me asking, whats the weakest point of my drabbles, because i want to improve them.

he is so sweet, i love onew, he's such a sunshine ♥

[salted_taiyaki]

aw man well drabbles, imo, are really hard to crit because they're just supposed to be short... I mean from what i can tell, you're very good at condensing your words to get your point across! i mean there's not much room for you to actually try and reach out to improve because it's so...limited? imo ha ha. Your drabbles are short and express a lovely tone, idk what to help you with! [also I'm flustered because I didn't think anyone would ask me for help lksjdf ;; !!] sorry I can't be of much help... maybe when I'm in more of a critiquing mood? aha /lame

he is he is ♥

[paintingseas]

omo, sorry i didn't mean to fluster you, i was just wondering because i'm all for feedback from readers. comments are part of the review process so they're just as important to me as the actual creation. thank you for your time, i hope i don't sound like i'm pressuring you ;~;