this is oh-so-very-pretty... i love the imagery ♥ and especially love the ot5, almost as much as the soulmates' love ^.^
just some comments though, pls don't take this the wrong way. i thought that there could be more description on how or why soulmates fell in love with each other, i just felt that their connections weren't really felt. for something that was created within 2 weeks and half a year of emails, what have they gained, or missed? and within another half a year of jaejoong going MIA, what kept chun going strong? =)
ahh, we thought so too. we tried our best to fit the entire plot into a reasonable word count, but obviously that failed. every time we added a scene the entire fic grew longer and longer. there were scenes taken out throughout the process and those were the details that described their relationship. i completely agree with you saying that we could have more details about it all. but the fic just ended up way too long so we had to cut back quite a bit. ...and on top of that we were late in sending this fic in.
lol, there wasn't but we just wanted the whole thing to end quickly. and we thought that there probably wouldn't be anyone who was willing to read something over 20,000 words long. :(
anyone will be willing to read a good fic, and this is a good fic =) now the question should be, would anyone be willing to read over 30++ chapters of fic of questionable quality~
just some comments though, pls don't take this the wrong way. i thought that there could be more description on how or why soulmates fell in love with each other, i just felt that their connections weren't really felt. for something that was created within 2 weeks and half a year of emails, what have they gained, or missed? and within another half a year of jaejoong going MIA, what kept chun going strong? =)
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ahh, we thought so too. we tried our best to fit the entire plot into a reasonable word count, but obviously that failed. every time we added a scene the entire fic grew longer and longer. there were scenes taken out throughout the process and those were the details that described their relationship. i completely agree with you saying that we could have more details about it all. but the fic just ended up way too long so we had to cut back quite a bit. ...and on top of that we were late in sending this fic in.
anyway, thanks for the critique!
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LOL. ah, yes. that is a good question... which i'm not going to answer because i'm sure we both know what i'm going to say.
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