Round One!

Apr 02, 2011 15:20

a kink meme is where you request a pairing and a prompt/kink anonymously, and someone else (or several someone elses for that matter) can fill that said prompt (also anonymously if they so wish). again, like i stated in the rules this is called a kink meme, but the rules are pretty lax on how "kinky" it is. if you don't want sex in your prompt, ( Read more... )

kink meme, round one

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Fill: (2/2) anonymous April 10 2011, 07:49:48 UTC
“His name is Eugene Sledge,” he told the corpsman.

The corpsman didn’t even look at Sledge. He pressed both hands down over the private’s chest and tried to stop the bleeding. The private wasn’t even breathing.

“He’s gone,” he said. “Look at Sledgehammah.”

Snafu waited, and when the corpsman didn’t acknowledge him or Sledge, he reached over and grabbed him by the collars. He shook the corpsman, rage burning his eyes red.

“You fuckin’ listen to me now,” he said, voice low and face so close to the corpsman that the tips of their noses were touching. “If Gene dies, I’m buryin’ you next to him. You understand?”

The corpsman shuddered and looked down at Sledge. He nodded, nervous, and Snafu let him go. He took out his kit and got down to work.

Snafu stepped back, reaching to light a cigarette, and watched the corpsman tend to Sledge. The corpsman took out the bullet and wrapped up the wound. Sledge groaned but was still mostly out of it. The corpsman looked up at Snafu, lips quivering.

“He’s going to be fine,” the corpsman said. “We’ll get him a bed.”

Snafu didn’t say anything or react in any significant way. He only exhaled the smoke, took a longing look at Sledge, and walked away.

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Hope it was what you were looking for, OP!

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OP here! anonymous April 11 2011, 04:37:21 UTC
OH MY GOD I WAS SO HAPPY TO SEE THIS FILLED!

I loved it so much. That was everything I wanted and more! The way Snafu refused to leave Sledge, the way Sledge wanted to keep fighting. The characterization was spot on. I can just so clearly see Snafu screaming at the doctor, and then not showing any reaction when Sledge is alright in the end. UGH I JUST CAN'T DESCRIBE MY JOY. This is amazing! Thank you so much!

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Re: Fill: (2/2) velven October 29 2011, 22:29:49 UTC
Okay late comment, buuuuut I really enjoyed this, loved the characterisation and Snafu's desperation really came across well. Great fill!

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