This was so so amazing. I feel like I haven't read any good classical twins in years, especially after this story of yours. It's so good to come back in time a bit as well - to come back to the younger twins when Tom still had dreads and Bill had long beautiful hair and their characters were slightly different, and Bill exactly yielding to his brother because he just can't be mad at him, - Tom being his most important person, to whom all the other guys could never match.
I enjoyed reading this story so much, and I really really love Tom, how from the very beginning it seemed that Tom didn't like the idea of Bill being with another man - when he hugged him for the first time in this story, and his hug was stronger, the traces of possessiveness already undoubtedly kicking in.
I loved the way Georg somewhat helped Bill come to his conclusions, and then the realization and Tom finally taking Bill to bed (not without a hint of perfect humor!) were amazing scenes. Tom taking Bill to his bed will never get old <3 And Tom's orders, ohhhh it was such a fresh breeze to read him like that, you have no idea! Usually it's Bill who is portrayed to be bossy or a pushy bottom in bed, and I have no doubt he could be like that; but reading it about Tom never fails to bring awe-inspiring feelings to me. This was brilliant, and so unbelievably cocky of Tom, oh goodness. LOVE.
I loved how the story ended in a repetitive way, Bill talking with some guy and Tom joining Bill, only that now they know exactly where they are.
Thank you so much for writing this, now I'm all happy and nostalgic.
Classical twins! What a wonderful description. I love them when they're around 17, for exactly the reasons you state. I've been in this fandom for a year so I wasn't even here at the time, I didn't even know about Tokio Hotel (as incredible as that sounds!) before 2010. But I can still write about Tom's dreads and Tom being the most important person in the world for Bill. ♥
Possessive Tom is so lovely! Especially when he's hugging Bill and maybe doesn't realise his possessiveness just yet, when he's maybe just thinking that Bill fits in his arms so well... *g*
I'm glad you liked -- and noticed -- the hint of humour! When I was writing this I thought it was very humorous, but my first readers didn't seem to think that at all. I'm cool with all kinds of interpretations but it still warms me that you commented on it.
Hee, I didn't even realise the way Tom is portrayed here is unusual! I'm happy to provide that, though. :D It's really easy to imagine Tom being unbelievable cocky... and so much fun, too!
You're very welcome! I'm thrilled that this made you feel nostalgic. Thanks for the marvellous comment!
Hmmm well your writing, at least in this story I know, is rather serious, but there were a few moments that brought some humor to the situation, which were very enjoyable, playing on Bill's love for dramatic moments - which IS true irl :-D
As for Tom's portrayal - well, it's not unusual per se (at least to me it's not because it's exactly how I think of him), but rather stands out in the latest trends of writing where it's Bill who reigns in bed and is bossy and demanding. I wouldn't put it past him irl, but I think Tom is as bossy as Bill is, and in something that intimate, I'd believe Tom shows himself even more there; simply because Bill already is so frigging dominant in all other spheres of their life, he just HAS to be yielding in some part of the life.
And here I thought I was writing a humour story... I guess the idea that I had was very different than what I eventually wrote down! I'm glad you enjoyed the few funny moments, still. :)
I guess the characterisation of Tom isn't that unusual in the whole fandom, since there is a lot of variety, but as you say, the latest trends are leaning towards Bill being bossy. I agree that that Tom is just as bossy as Bill is. And haven't they said they're the same, pretty much? *g*
I enjoyed reading this story so much, and I really really love Tom, how from the very beginning it seemed that Tom didn't like the idea of Bill being with another man - when he hugged him for the first time in this story, and his hug was stronger, the traces of possessiveness already undoubtedly kicking in.
I loved the way Georg somewhat helped Bill come to his conclusions, and then the realization and Tom finally taking Bill to bed (not without a hint of perfect humor!) were amazing scenes. Tom taking Bill to his bed will never get old <3 And Tom's orders, ohhhh it was such a fresh breeze to read him like that, you have no idea! Usually it's Bill who is portrayed to be bossy or a pushy bottom in bed, and I have no doubt he could be like that; but reading it about Tom never fails to bring awe-inspiring feelings to me. This was brilliant, and so unbelievably cocky of Tom, oh goodness. LOVE.
I loved how the story ended in a repetitive way, Bill talking with some guy and Tom joining Bill, only that now they know exactly where they are.
Thank you so much for writing this, now I'm all happy and nostalgic.
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Possessive Tom is so lovely! Especially when he's hugging Bill and maybe doesn't realise his possessiveness just yet, when he's maybe just thinking that Bill fits in his arms so well... *g*
I'm glad you liked -- and noticed -- the hint of humour! When I was writing this I thought it was very humorous, but my first readers didn't seem to think that at all. I'm cool with all kinds of interpretations but it still warms me that you commented on it.
Hee, I didn't even realise the way Tom is portrayed here is unusual! I'm happy to provide that, though. :D It's really easy to imagine Tom being unbelievable cocky... and so much fun, too!
You're very welcome! I'm thrilled that this made you feel nostalgic. Thanks for the marvellous comment!
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As for Tom's portrayal - well, it's not unusual per se (at least to me it's not because it's exactly how I think of him), but rather stands out in the latest trends of writing where it's Bill who reigns in bed and is bossy and demanding. I wouldn't put it past him irl, but I think Tom is as bossy as Bill is, and in something that intimate, I'd believe Tom shows himself even more there; simply because Bill already is so frigging dominant in all other spheres of their life, he just HAS to be yielding in some part of the life.
I will be looking forward to more from you <3
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I guess the characterisation of Tom isn't that unusual in the whole fandom, since there is a lot of variety, but as you say, the latest trends are leaning towards Bill being bossy. I agree that that Tom is just as bossy as Bill is. And haven't they said they're the same, pretty much? *g*
Thank you for the encouragement!
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