Comments | paceus: TH fic "Shimmy Shimmy" (Tom/Bill)

paceus

TH fic "Shimmy Shimmy" (Tom/Bill)

Feb 13, 2011 16:16

A twincest-y fic written for the toho_kinkmeme prompt "Bill bellydancing for Tom."

Thanks to steinsgrrl for the wonderful beta! ♥

Shimmy Shimmy

( Bill dances. Tom feels uncomfortable. )

my fics, tokio hotel

Comments 9

strssna February 13 2011, 15:14:08 UTC

I love the atmosphere in this! So sexy, and intense, with little sparks filling up the air. And the picture - wow. I think bellydancing!Bill is my new kink :D

paceus February 13 2011, 16:06:01 UTC

Glad to have recruited you! *g* Bellydancing is hot and if Bill danced like that... or wore the clothes... guh.

Thank you -- your comment made me so happy! I'm glad the writing worked for you.

lilliephoenix February 13 2011, 15:17:49 UTC

i love how bill can go from serious temptress, to bubbly chatterbox in like, .05 seconds.

""No one! I can't think about anyone for real, it would be distracting. The emotion is all play-acting!""

love this line. it's so bill! <3

paceus February 13 2011, 16:08:44 UTC

I'm so happy you find it in character! Thank you. :) I love that he's got all those sides, too. In some pictures he's smouldering and bubbly in the next!

lilliephoenix February 13 2011, 17:22:34 UTC

this story reminded me of this video. it's kinda long, but he is really good. and sparkly!

i could so see bill in the purple outfit. ;-)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=axUixg0RFaI

paceus February 13 2011, 17:50:42 UTC

Wow! I'd love to see Bill wearing that outfit! Some of the dancing is exactly what Bill does in this fic, too. :)

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paceus February 13 2011, 16:10:19 UTC

Hee! The happy, enjoying-himself expression works, too. <3 Thank you for commenting! And especially thank you for the picture. I feel so thrilled every time I look at it. :D

velia7 February 19 2011, 07:14:04 UTC

Hi.

At the end of the story I was wondering about Bill Bellydancing. I thought that if Bill is so damn sexy without bellydance sductive moves, then dancing something that is supposed to lure the watcher he should be -as Tom said- devastating.

Great fic, will it have a sequel or should we imagine with our pervvy minds what might happen when Bill dances again for Tom?

See you!!

paceus February 22 2011, 16:51:30 UTC

Hi! Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you liked the story.

I'd love to see Bill bellydancing! I think he would be good at it. *g* As you say, he's so damn sexy already!

I like the idea of a sequel but I don't know if I have the opportunity to write one, sadly. Imagining, though... I know I'll be thinking about it. :D