TH fic "A Troubled Masseur" 1/2 (Tom/Bill, explicit)

Oct 09, 2010 16:47

This is the first part of a sequel to my explicit twincest fic A Massage Master. Written for Smut Saturday!

A Troubled Masseur

Summary: Tom finds out that giving your little brother a prostate massage may result in morally questionable situations.

Thanks to steinsgrrl for the beta! And helkamaria for useful comments and encouragement, as well!

Things were not going too well for Tom. )

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fyredancer October 10 2010, 01:57:47 UTC
I love this fic so much I came over here to flail some more. <3 He'd just promised to stroke Bill inside his ass until Bill came, and Bill didn't think it was problematic at all. Bill had asked for it! Poor protective Tom, so distraught over all he's learned - and the fact he feels responsible for making Bill want it!

This was absolutely beautiful: Bill was concentrating on Tom's finger that was, now that Tom thought about it, caressing the glossy magazine page slowly and lovingly. This dawned on Tom right when he was looking at Bill and Bill licked his lips, and then there was a consecutive train wreck of Tom's breath catching at the sight of the soft tip of Bill's tongue, and Bill shifting his hips and letting his legs fall open a little, and then Tom was suddenly rock hard and faltering. - Not a word exchanged between them and yet they're both so, so turned on. And I'm not sure Tom realizes that Bill IS, and moreover Bill may be a bit more in tune with what he's feeling than Tom. <3

I was so delighted to realize you wrote the first story but even more jazzed that we're getting MORE. *_* Thank you!

Looking forward to seeing more anxious Tom and excited Bill and where they both go from here.

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paceus October 10 2010, 16:45:47 UTC
Your icon is so lovely, and also distracting me from answering your comment...

I'm so happy you like my story! :D Tom does feel distraught and confused and guilty, poor thing. Protectiveness combined with sexual feelings toward your brother isn't easy!

I'm thrilled by your speculation, hee. It's so much fun to read about what you think is going on in Bill's head! Thanks for lovely comments, both of them!

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