1 sentence challenge: Nnoinel

Nov 01, 2008 14:39

Title: It never was: Collection of 50 sentences on NnoiNel
Fandom: Bleach
Characters: Nnoitra Jiruga, Neliel Tu Oderschvank
Pairing: Nnoitra x Neliel
Theme Set: Beta
Rating: T I fail at smut
Author's Notes: Written for 1sentence challenge because I need a break from Math dammit.

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celemna November 2 2008, 00:16:16 UTC
I AM AMAZED. You are so awesome for writing this, I really really loved it. T_T Now I want to post the doujins I hadnt been...T_T Thank you so much!

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p_sky November 2 2008, 18:08:05 UTC
Thank you very much!!! I had a feeling you might like it XD

And doujins sound greattttttt~ But only if you have time =)

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some_scribbles November 2 2008, 05:39:03 UTC
Very lovely, Elle!

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p_sky November 2 2008, 18:08:22 UTC
Thanks Shira ^^

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hinodeh November 2 2008, 09:20:55 UTC
Absolutely lovely! Those sentences capture their relationship so well.

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p_sky November 2 2008, 18:08:49 UTC
Thank you very much =)

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p_sky November 2 2008, 20:45:59 UTC
Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it ♥

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anemoneoflight November 3 2008, 01:01:13 UTC
ASDFGHJKL THIS IS TOO BEAUTIFUL!

I attempted to pick favorites while reading it the third time around but the list ended up so long. War flows perfectly. Burning is so very Nnoitra. Just is so Neliel. Sorrow made me feel the painful pangs of loss Neliel must have felt at that moment. Serenade is great for including Santa Teresa and a hymn. Gah, this is getting too long already but Sordid is pretty much my favorite because it sums up their relationship perfectly. It's tied with Natural though because that's such an ingenious way to use the prompt. Never in a million years would I have thought of that. Okay, okay I'm just going to go ahead and mem this and reread for a couple hundred more times. Once again, bravo Elle!

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p_sky November 3 2008, 03:19:16 UTC
Hee! You always write the best reviews =3

I'm, well, ecstatic that you liked it so much XD Quite honestly I was nervous about how this would turn out because I wasn't really feeling some of these sentences. But if you give me such awesome feedback then I suppose it didn't turn out too bad XD

♥♥♥

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