Comments | ozmissage: Three Lost Ficlets

ozmissage

Three Lost Ficlets

Sep 16, 2009 15:26

Some more substantial stuff should be coming soon, but in the mean time I hope you guys enjoy these completely self-indulgent ficlets.

Title: Sleeping Arrangements
Pairing: Dan/Charlotte
Rating: PG
Words: 568
Setting: Early season five.
Warnings: Fluff.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/N: For ( Read more... )

fic: shannon/sayid, fic:lost, fic: shannon, fic: jack/boone, fic: boone, fic: dan/charlotte

Comments 9

valhalla37 September 17 2009, 13:46:53 UTC

YOU ARE AWESOME. THIS IS AWESOME ( ... )

ozmissage September 17 2009, 15:54:22 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! You know I always worry about writing Dan so I'm so glad you liked him here. I have a soft spot for snuggling/comfort fics too and Dan/Charlotte are so adorable they lend themselves to it nicely.

Personal canon! Wow, thank you so much! *blushes* This is pretty much what came to mind the minute I read your prompt it just took me awhile to get around to posting it. :)

(That is a gorgeous Dan/Charlotte icon btw.)

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ozmissage September 17 2009, 23:00:42 UTC

Heh. Thanks! I think it's an illness at this point. ;)

lozateazer September 21 2009, 06:33:39 UTC

Oh, the Jack/Boone. You can just feel Boone's longing, and need, and the heartache at him not having that. I also love seeing Jack the way Boone sees him in his dreams. And the snark between Boone and Shannon was perfect. Very lovely, thank you.

ozmissage September 21 2009, 14:36:46 UTC

Thank you so much for such a nice comment!I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

sedauny September 22 2009, 01:46:19 UTC

I liked these very much. Charlotte's assessment of the other time-travelers was very astute and the placement--Juliet and Sawyer near each other, Locke and Miles far apart--fit neatly into the character's pasts and their futures. Her cuddling with Dan was so sweet it made me "awww" out loud, which I then repeated for Shannon ( ... )

ozmissage September 22 2009, 23:29:45 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! Your feedback always makes me happy.

I wasn't a fan of the Shannon/Sayid pairing either, but I like the influence he had on Shannon. She seemed to loosen up around him and let her guard down. I agree there was a lot of potential in her character that the writers never bothered to explore.

aurilly September 26 2009, 02:02:35 UTC

Oh! The Shannon/Sayid one is so incredibly wonderful. I love it so. Your flash to her past was so heartbreaking and just... my new personal canon, poor thing. And I loved how you had Sayid SEE it, and intuitively know and make her feel better. The way you wrote their relationship here is my absolute favorite interpretation, just encouraging and supportive and Shannon feeling alive and worthwhile again.

This was lovely. Thank you!

ozmissage September 26 2009, 17:03:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I had never attempted writing their relationship before so I wasn't sure if I had gotten their dynamic just right. I'm so glad you liked it! :)