Drabble: Big, Stupid, Clumsy Hands, Teen

[ozmafics]

Title: Big, Stupid Clumsy Hands.
Rating Teen
Word count: Under 500
Summary: After an unfortunate glimpse of them on someone else's backside, Hermione finds herself obsessing over Ron's hands.  
Pairing: R/Hr, Ron/Lavender (HBP era)

Inspired by shocolate 's prompt of 'Ron's Hands' and  grownupron 's prompt of 'Ron's not the only one jealous and possesive.'

Comments

[mollywheezy]

Absolutely brilliant drabble! Loved it! :D

[otterandterrier]

Great drabble!
Poor heart-broken Hermione, you did a brilliant work portraying her feelings here.
Congrats for the nomination!

[wordsmithsonian]

I love this so, so, so much!

Congratulations on the rhr_awards nomination, it is very much deserved!

Hermione is completely in character here, the way she masks her sadness with furious disdain is spot-on and beautifully conveyed.

This line:
"Ron’s long fingers, curling into Lavender’s ample flesh, his dirty fingernails, bitten to the quick, his wrists already peeking out of the cuffs of a threadbare jumper that was obviously cut for someone shorter and stouter than he was."
- Perfect.
I love all of the details that she notices about him, and the way you have so wonderfully characterized Ron simply through a description of his hands!

From the title to the very last line, I love it!

[douttasite]

LOVE. I adore Ron's dirty fingernails and big, clumsy hands. I can totally see Hermione being completely (repressedly) jealous of them on Lav Lav's skanky ass. Ugh! Enjoyed this so much.