Wish #6 for haru776 (2/3)

[oz_magi]

by shabby86

Wish 6
Request 2:
Pairing/Character(s): Beecher/Keller or (crossover) Beecher/Stabler
Keyword/Prompt Phrase: Dirty
Canon/AU/Either: Either
Special Requests: I prefer humor things but that is up to you.
Story/Art/Either: Either

Title: Many Kinds of Dirty

Comments

[vanillalime]

Whoa, this was quite the story! Poor Toby! It's a good thing that Elliot is such a good, sensitive SVU detective. Then poor Elliot! It was beautiful how their relationship had progressed to the point where Toby was able to be the one to provide the comfort. And then the sexy ending, where dirty takes on a whole different meaning... that was a great way of showing how they've grown and moved on from their earlier demons. I really like how you gave them a happy ending together. :-)

And my absolute favorite bit was how Toby had an "Elliot's punishment" playlist on his iPod, because that is so Toby. LOL

[ozsaur]

I really enjoyed the transition of Elliot and Toby's relationship. Toby started out broken, and ended up strong and confident. Elliot started out as the one giving comfort, but ended up needing it himself. The ending was a sexy surprise! Well done!

[haru776]

Oh, You have a good talent for writing. I thought this story would be sad and bitter but you make a change to a happy and hot end from that during this short sentence. I like it. Thank you so much!

[shabby86]

I’m glad you liked this story. I wasn’t sure about you liking the sad parts, but I wanted to show how their relationship was forged. I planned from the start to give you a more positive ending though!

[trillingstar]

I liked how Toby comforted Elliot, both with words and actions, and that they *napped*! There are not enough naps in fic. And I loved how you turned 'dirty' into a good thing for Elliot. Unf!