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dishyfishy July 31 2009, 16:22:24 UTC
Yes! I can't even describe how excited I was when I saw you posted! I loved this chapter. So glad to finally know who was on the balcony, and it was great to have a chapter that was all about Logan and Veronica, after the last two were so ambiguous.

First off, Piz is a creeper. Ew, Piz. And as much as I disliked Taylor in this chapter, I can't believe Veronica slashed her tires! Very crazy and jealous! It really made me sad, to see that she's gotten to that place. I just hope it doesn't come back to bite her in the ass...

I don't even know what to say about all the L/V drama. It was great. I especially loved the talk through the door. They've both been in the wrong here, but that conversation in the bedroom just made me want to give Logan a great big hug :( I hope they can pull back from the edge. Veronica needs to get her act together!

This was a great read; I can't wait for the next installment!

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oz_black_cat August 1 2009, 14:35:32 UTC
Thank you for the comment! It's great to hear that you're invested in the story. Yes, Veronica is not in a good place. I think love is making her crazy :) I'm sorry about the delay for posting this. I really do want to get them out as quick as I can!

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Confused! anonymous July 31 2009, 18:07:39 UTC
I'm a little bit confused about something. Will this be a happy LoVe story with them working through the issue in the end or will it be one about how they're not write for each other and whatnot?

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anonymous July 31 2009, 21:59:02 UTC
I never know how I'm going to feel when I see an update. You're really good at writing angst which I usually love because I can kinda sense when a story is going to get better in the end but this is giving me ulcers. Maybe the unpredictability says good things for you as a writer but on my end its not a great feeling. I love this story I really do but I always approach reading with caution just to be on the safe side of things. My heart can only take so much. This chapter didn't upset me nearly as much as the last two so hopefully this is the beginning of a trend for better things to come. Whatever my feeling are, one thing is clear, and that is that your story is awesome and whether i love it or just love to hate it, i'm way too invested in this to ever stop wanting to read your updates. More soon please :D

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oz_black_cat August 1 2009, 14:38:20 UTC
Hee! Thanks for the comment(s) :) you are not the first person to tell me this story is giving them ulcers, I hope I don't kill off all my readers! I'm glad you are enjoying the story though, despite that. I am working on the next chapter this weekend, so hopefully not a month long gap this time :)

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popaddict July 31 2009, 22:25:17 UTC
Oh, Veronica.

How I loathe you sometimes.

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oz_black_cat August 1 2009, 14:40:03 UTC
When I've been re-reading scripts for season 3 for this fic I get annoyed all over again at some of things she did in canon... grrr... but then, I don't want to get too AU with her, so find myself writing her doing annoying things. double grrr.... :) Thanks for the comment!

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celtic_flicka July 31 2009, 22:57:08 UTC
I really like how the changes turned out, as well as the ending that you were holding out on me! :)

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oz_black_cat August 1 2009, 14:43:13 UTC
Hee! It wasn't much of an addition, I just wanted to bring the 3 chapters full circle. Thanks so much for all your help on this one, as always :)

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