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[oxoniensis]

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Dead or Alive, Django Unchained, King Schultz/OC, bounty, capture

[fishmalk]

Full story: http://archiveofourown.org/works/647051... )

Re: Dead or Alive, Django Unchained, King Schultz/OC, bounty, capture

[curtana]

Eee, I loved this! You really did a great job with the dialogue and the tone of the story - listening to Dr. Schultz talk is awesome :) Thank you for writing it!

Re: Dead or Alive, Django Unchained, King Schultz/OC, bounty, capture

[fishmalk]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)

Re: Dead or Alive, Django Unchained, King Schultz/OC, bounty, capture

[capn_trips]

This was just AWESOME. I love what you did with this prompt. I love the turn it took. You especially have a gift for his dialogue, by the way. Which is what hooked me immediately. I was hoping someone would write something like this, and I'm just so incredibly happy. Thank you!

Re: Dead or Alive, Django Unchained, King Schultz/OC, bounty, capture

[fishmalk]

Thank you! I'm glad that his dialogue and voice came across well! I was really hoping it would. Doing a character like Dr. Schultz is a high bar to set, since his voice is so unique. :)

Re: Dead or Alive, Django Unchained, King Schultz/OC, bounty, capture

[ghanistarkiller]

Oh my God, this is insane! You capture the feel and the mood perfectly; your description in the prose from beginning to end just sets up such a vivid picture! And the dialogue is so sharp and snappy and in character! Loved it! :D

Re: Dead or Alive, Django Unchained, King Schultz/OC, bounty, capture

[fishmalk]

THank you so much! That's high praise indeed! :D