More Than Erebor, The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey, Thorin Oakenshield/Thranduil, betray, regret oxoniensisJanuary 20 2013, 15:41:40 UTC
Full prompt list: betray, regret, sorrow, history, friends, young
"Help us!" Thorin shouted. His voice travelled across the plain, even above the roar of dragon-fire and the screams of the dying and dispossessed, the crashing of rocks as his kingdom turned to ash. Above all that noise, his plea reached Thranduil.
Thorin watched Thranduil, astride his elk, his tall army lined up behind. Even at so great a distance, he knew the moment Thranduil betrayed him, could sense the glimmer of pained sadness that radiated from him. If Thorin's heart had not already been crushed from the loss of Erebor, that would surely have broken it.
They had been friends, once.
More than friends. The stony king who rode away without a word or glance behind had once tumbled with Thorin in the woods, their cloaks laid on leaves, a bed not for a prince and a king or for a dwarf and an elf, but for lovers. They had supped together and hunted together, and stolen any moments they could alone. They had laughed together, cares forgotten for a while, their world narrowed to the heat between them. Thorin had pressed kisses to Thranduil's smooth cheek as they spilled their seed on the ground between them. They had lain together afterwards, golden hair and dark as tangled as their pale limbs, sharing the warmth of each other's bodies. They would always love like this; they swore an oath at Thranduil's bequest, though Thorin felt no need for such mighty words when his heart was as true as a dwarvish blade.
"Help us!" he shouted, but no help came, and more than Erebor was lost that day.
Re: More Than Erebor, The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey, Thorin Oakenshield/Thranduil, betray, regreoxoniensisJanuary 20 2013, 21:45:49 UTC
Thank you so much!
The prompts were all collected on a couple of posts (one on Dreamwidth, one on Livejournal) that are closed now, and the sorted prompts are available here. There are a couple of links to it on the entries page (the largest one is near the bottom) is you want to refer to it frequently. Hope that helps you get started!
Re: More Than Erebor, The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey, Thorin Oakenshield/Thranduil, betray, regredownjuneJanuary 20 2013, 22:00:53 UTC
*epiphany music!* There it is! Like magic. I swear I clicked like five different time and there was nothing, and then I opened the link in chrome and !
Thank you, thank you! and rock on again for Hobbit fic!
Re: More Than Erebor, The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey, Thorin Oakenshield/Thranduil, betray, regreoxoniensisJanuary 20 2013, 22:16:41 UTC
Were you using safari on an ipad? Someone else was earlier, and couldn't get it to show up, even though she'd refreshed it. Anyway, glad we have success! And I'm glad you enjoyed my little attempt at Hobbit fic!
"Help us!" Thorin shouted. His voice travelled across the plain, even above the roar of dragon-fire and the screams of the dying and dispossessed, the crashing of rocks as his kingdom turned to ash. Above all that noise, his plea reached Thranduil.
Thorin watched Thranduil, astride his elk, his tall army lined up behind. Even at so great a distance, he knew the moment Thranduil betrayed him, could sense the glimmer of pained sadness that radiated from him. If Thorin's heart had not already been crushed from the loss of Erebor, that would surely have broken it.
They had been friends, once.
More than friends. The stony king who rode away without a word or glance behind had once tumbled with Thorin in the woods, their cloaks laid on leaves, a bed not for a prince and a king or for a dwarf and an elf, but for lovers. They had supped together and hunted together, and stolen any moments they could alone. They had laughed together, cares forgotten for a while, their world narrowed to the heat between them. Thorin had pressed kisses to Thranduil's smooth cheek as they spilled their seed on the ground between them. They had lain together afterwards, golden hair and dark as tangled as their pale limbs, sharing the warmth of each other's bodies. They would always love like this; they swore an oath at Thranduil's bequest, though Thorin felt no need for such mighty words when his heart was as true as a dwarvish blade.
"Help us!" he shouted, but no help came, and more than Erebor was lost that day.
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And, sorry, but where are you getting your prompts? The prompt post isn't up yet. I'd like to get started, too, but I don't see prompts?
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The prompts were all collected on a couple of posts (one on Dreamwidth, one on Livejournal) that are closed now, and the sorted prompts are available here. There are a couple of links to it on the entries page (the largest one is near the bottom) is you want to refer to it frequently. Hope that helps you get started!
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And don't worry about bugging me - I'm here to help!
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Thank you, thank you! and rock on again for Hobbit fic!
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