Generation Kill fic: your name falling from my lips

[oxoniensis]

OMG, it feels so good to be writing again! I woke up at 3am to scribble a snippet of dialogue down (Lord Fick and Mr Colbert dialogue, gah), and then this (completely unrelated) flew out in my lunchbreak. I think I like it rather a lot.

Title: your name falling from my lips
Fandom: Generation Kill
Characters: Brad/Nate, Ray
Genre: First time,

Comments

[molokomolotov]

Yes. And Nate would have a Volvo.

and I approve of more lord fick/mr. colbert!

[oxoniensis]

Hee, I just wrote Volvo without thinking, but thinking over it now, I rather think it's become fanon! I should have picked something else - that's the trouble with writing too fast!

[fourfreedoms]

This fic makes me all warm and fuzzy at the same time that it's really hot!

I know I told you already, but I still love this: He often wonders how much he's fucking up, of course, just never with the slick of Brad's come still wet on his belly, or the smell of sex in the air, or the lingering feel of Brad's flank under his hands.

To me that's sort of what makes Brad/Nate so delicious! Getting together really would be fucking up, even if they'd be awesome together!

[oxoniensis]

Yay, I'm so glad it came over as hot - I have to confess, my initial reason for going for a 'two things that didn't happen' format was it gave me an excuse to write porn!

To me that's sort of what makes Brad/Nate so delicious! Getting together really would be fucking up, even if they'd be awesome together!

There'd be all that tension and knowledge of how wrong it is, and yes, it just makes it all so much more exciting to read and write!

[wildestranger]

Gorgeous. I approve of all this pining, and your Ray was particularly lovely.

[oxoniensis]

Thank you! I'm rather a fan of pining, and of course Ray is always fun to write!

[nightanddaze]

So, so lovely. ♥

[oxoniensis]

Thank you! :-)

[live_laugh_love]

*sigh* ::makes dreamy swoony eyes at you::

Man. I'm dragging this YAGKYAS story out tentacle by stringy fucking tentacle and you bang out this beautifulness in a lunch hour. GAH!!!!!

[oxoniensis]

Argh, I feel for you - sometimes stories come out painful word at a time - I've been there! I do love it when they just happen, though, when before I know it I've got something finished down on the page.