Generation Kill fic: last into the light

[oxoniensis]

Title: last into the light
Fandom: Generation Kill
Characters: Brad/Nate
Genre: First time, post series
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2,104 words
Disclaimer: Based on the fictionalized characters in the HBO miniseries, and not intended as any reflection on the real people bearing these names.
Notes: Thanks to alethialia for the super, last minute beta. Happy

Comments

[fourfreedoms]

Nate wants this to survive daylight.

Oh, there is so much in that sentence! I love Brad's quiet seduction and the fact that Nate didn't quite understand what it meant at first, so Brad had to come back and SHOW HIM. There's something quite funny about that, but also really really lovely.

[oxoniensis]

Thank you - I'm so glad you picked that line, because I wanted it to be more than just a half-drunken post-party thing.

[oxoniensis]

Thank you - I'm so glad it felt natural! And that the porn was hot - I'm not normally one for managing to write porn quickly!

[alethialia]

That's what it'll be like from now on.

I liked this line! I don't think I mentioned.

"I said I could be quiet. I didn't say I was going to be," Brad says, pussying out of the charge.

Hee! That's great.

Nate wants this to survive daylight.

That line is still my favorite. Just awesome.

Aww, boys. ::hearts::

[oxoniensis]

Thanks again, so much - I think the changes you suggested are most of my favourite bits now!

[silviakundera]

I like this confident Brad, guiding them along. And Nate just a little lost now. Very well done!

[oxoniensis]

Thank you - I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[shoshannagold]

Oooh, something happy to read on the way home! Lovely timing. and once I'm home, I'm reading the Wizards AU - because OMG, where did the last two days go?

[oxoniensis]

I was supposed to be writing more Wizards AU today, but I decided Laura's birthday took priority. I'm going to have to write like crazy to finish it now! Eeek.

[shoshannagold]

I have total faith that you can do it!

[oxoniensis]

Hee, I don't! I'm debating writing some other prompts instead, just some quickies over the next few days, and finishing the wizards fic more leisurely (especially as it'll need major beta time). I shall see how it goes tomorrow and Thursday.