Supernatural drabble: first breath out of the water

Mar 31, 2008 19:10

I'm not really allowing myself to write anything other than my Sweet Charity pinch hit at the moment, but this sort of snuck out in my tea break.

first breath out of the water [Supernatural, Dean, Lucas, Andrea, G, 100 words, for the 100_ghosts 1x03 coda prompt]

There's a moment he thinks he won't make it. )

fiction: supernatural, fiction, fandom: supernatural

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tigriswolf March 31 2008, 18:28:50 UTC
Love that scene. And this drabble.

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oxoniensis March 31 2008, 21:23:13 UTC
It was a powerful sequence - I'm surprised I still held out from falling for the show, even after that episode.

Glad you enjoyed the drabble - thanks!

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iamstealthyone March 31 2008, 18:33:23 UTC
Andrea thanks him with her eyes and words and later with a lingering kiss. But it's the sound of Lucas' breath he always remembers.

Aww, lovely. Of course Dean pushes himself as hard as he can for Andrea and Lucas.

Nicely done.

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oxoniensis March 31 2008, 21:24:37 UTC
Thank you!

Dean really was so good with Lucas - I think this episode showed us a lot about the sort of man Dean is.

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iamstealthyone March 31 2008, 21:35:17 UTC
I think this episode showed us a lot about the sort of man Dean is.

*nods* I can see why Jensen says he got a good feel for the character after doing this ep.

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oh_mcgee March 31 2008, 19:31:12 UTC
Gosh.

Then he imagines Andrea's face if he surfaces again without Lucas

Dean needs a family so bad and this is why he does what he does. If he can't have one, then he's going to make sure everyone else can. *cries*

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oxoniensis March 31 2008, 21:27:21 UTC
Yes, he really does go all out when families are hit. I can't help hoping that Ben will eventually turn out to be his.

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athenejen March 31 2008, 19:35:26 UTC
Ah, this is lovely.

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oxoniensis March 31 2008, 21:27:38 UTC
Thank you! :-)

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musesfool March 31 2008, 23:14:45 UTC
Oh, lovely.

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oxoniensis April 6 2008, 21:58:19 UTC
Thank you! :-)

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