Brokeback Mountain ficlet: all that is left is all that i hide

[oxoniensis]

all that is left is all that i hide [Brokeback Mountain, Ennis/Jack, 438 words, R, written for Porn Battle V, prompt word grass, original entry. Second pornlet of the day!]

Comments

[trascendenza]

Oh, oh, oh. There are so many things I could say to this, but I think this affected me is about all I can manage.

No need to talk about it, both knowing what they wanted and makin the most of it.
I love this. And the last lines, too. Just lovely and perfectly stark and quietly right.

[oxoniensis]

That's really the nicest thing you could say, so thank you! I'm really thrilled it struck a chord with you.

[innie_darling]

Ooh, that's wonderful. bedding down dizzy is especially nice!

[oxoniensis]

Thank you so much - I'm so pleased you liked it!

[amy_vic]

I am probably one of the only people on the planet who still has not seen Brokeback Mountain, but...damn, this ficlet is beautiful.

[oxoniensis]

Thank you so much for such lovely words!

It's a gorgeous movie, but I think I'm especially fond of the short story - it's just such a powerful piece of writing.

[mahaliem]

There's a note in the tin, too, and a folded up picture postcard, and the two of them together tell as best he can what Jack Twist and the time up on Brokeback Mountain meant to him.

This was wonderful. You wrote Ennis so well.

[oxoniensis]

Oh, thank you so much! I just had this sudden yearning to write them, and really enjoyed doing so, so I'm thrilled you liked it!

[out_there]

Oh, that's truly lovely, Signe. Prose just as spare and touching as the book itself.

[oxoniensis]

Aww, thank you, Annie! *beams*