Comments | oxoniensis: Supernatural ficlet: lines of escape in my mouth

oxoniensis

Supernatural ficlet: lines of escape in my mouth

Nov 07, 2007 18:57

lines of escape in my mouth [Supernatural, Sam/girl!Dean, PG-13, 730 words, spoilers to the end of season 2. Many thanks to vinylroad for the beta, and to Jeff Buckley for the title.]

( He lifts her up by the waist and kisses her, tastes the laughter and it's good. Takes some for himself, and he has to put her down, helpless with stolen laughter. )

fiction: supernatural, fiction, fandom: supernatural

Comments 37

romanyg November 7 2007, 19:10:09 UTC

Oh this is beautiful, the subtle repetition, the distinct details.

oxoniensis November 7 2007, 20:08:35 UTC

Thank you so much!

musesfool November 7 2007, 19:28:07 UTC

Oh, lovely.

oxoniensis November 7 2007, 20:08:56 UTC

Thanks! :-)

ignited November 7 2007, 20:22:10 UTC

Oh this is beautiful! I love the imagery, and the word choice here -- things just pop out, so vividly. I love all the little details. The whole feeling throughout and the closeness they have with one another. I never really get a chance to read much Girl!Dean fic so this was a wonderful surprise! Lovely story! :)

oxoniensis November 9 2007, 20:48:37 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! *hugs*

Funnily enough, it wasn't until after I wrote this and looked around a bit, I realised that while girl!Sam is very common, girl!Dean isn't at all. And now I'm really curious why.

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oxoniensis November 9 2007, 20:57:31 UTC

I think there's always a distinct relationship difference between older and younger siblings, even though it evolves as they grow. One of those things I thought about when I was writing this.

So glad you enjoyed it!

ephemerall November 7 2007, 22:47:33 UTC

this is absolutely beautiful.

oxoniensis November 9 2007, 20:59:18 UTC

Thank you so much!