Pushing Daisies fic: Five Ways the Piemaker Doesn't Kiss Chuck

[oxoniensis]

Five Ways the Piemaker Doesn't Kiss Chuck [Pushing Daisies, Ned/Chuck, G, 1,163 words, fluff. Beta thanks to the lovely schneestern. For slodwick, just because.]

Comments

[romanticalgirl]

Those are just lovely - especially the last one - and, even though I haven't seen it yet, they just feel like magic.

[oxoniensis]

Aww, thanks! I don't know how much sense it would have made without having seen the pilot, but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway!

[cozy_cupcake]

These are so lovely.

"It's soft," he says, and reaches out with it. She holds still, closes her eyes, lets the woolen thumb brush the corner of her mouth.

Chuck smiles, and Ned smiles, and the cars bump, nose to nose, little kisses.
LOVED this.

sigh. Very nice.

;)

[oxoniensis]

Thank you! It's the sort of show that seems to call for something fluffy and sweet!

[slodwick]

OMGOMGOMG.

This is just... *flaily hands* It's so SWEET and TENDER and LOVELY. It's like candy and I can see every scene and OH I LOVE IT!! *glee*

I assume candyfloss is the same thing as cotton candy?

[oxoniensis]

Wheee! *happiness*

Hee, yes, thanks for spotting! Have edited - I didn't have an American to check it for me, and I forgot about that.

[slodwick]

Seriously, it's so lovely. I keep re-reading it -- each scene like a storybook illustration in my head. I love your focus on colors (just like the show), and how different each scene is. ♥

[oxoniensis]

I love your focus on colors (just like the show)

I'd love to say that was deliberate, but I hadn't even realised I'd done that. *g* I think it was just that I was picturing the scenes as I was writing, and seeing them in that sort of larger than life colour that there is on the show.

[norwich36]

I loved all of these. *Happy sigh*

[oxoniensis]

Yay, thank you!

[minervacat]

this is heartbreaking and gorgeous and perfect.

[oxoniensis]

Aww, thanks! I almost thought I'd forgotten how to write fluff, but it's just fun sometimes!