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Porn Battle (the rematch)

Jun 09, 2006 12:57

It's here!

THE PORN BATTLE REMATCH BEGINSTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt from below (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting. That's all folks - just one bit of steamy, panty-wetting porn. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make ( Read more... )

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Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders malnpudl June 9 2006, 17:28:34 UTC

It's all Ray's fault, really, the way he grabbed Fraser across his chest that morning to prevent him from, well, walking unarmed into crossfire, if Fraser were to be honest, and he supposes he should be grateful to Ray for saving his life but all he can think of is the way Ray's hand lay over his pectoral and how every time Ray tugged Fraser this way or that for better cover, Fraser's suspender was pulled across his nipple, a sweet and shocking friction that distracted him even from the startling soft bulge of Ray's genitals against his buttocks ( ... )

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders tx_cronopio June 9 2006, 17:59:03 UTC

HOTHOTHOT. I love men's nipples, and hey, no fair turning me on at work!

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders brooklinegirl June 9 2006, 18:14:44 UTC

omfg.

I.

yes. that's - insanely hot. I just - wow. Fraser, and the suspenders, shirtless, and man, I don't even have a nipple fetish, but Fraser surely does. I LOVE this. Wow. *fans self*

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders justbreathe80 June 9 2006, 18:25:44 UTC

Um, okay. WOW, lady. That was very, very hot. I can totally see Fraser taking his time like that, being a little masochistic about it.

You give the DS fandom a good, porny name. YAY!

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders sprat June 9 2006, 20:11:01 UTC

Holy god, that's...whoo. A lot of very good imagery. *g* I love Fraser's reluctance, and all that longing is gorgeous.

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders sageness June 9 2006, 21:49:19 UTC

*is dead*

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders oxoniensis June 9 2006, 22:41:44 UTC

Oh yes, Fraser so determined to do his work, but not quite able to resist the temptation! Guh!!!

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders malnpudl June 15 2006, 23:55:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders lipsum June 10 2006, 01:17:21 UTC

*blush*

yes yes yes

...thank you.

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders malnpudl June 10 2006, 07:49:17 UTC

Thank you SO MUCH! I could KISS you for this prompt! *g*

I'm so very glad that you liked the result. *smooch*

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders j_s_cavalcante June 10 2006, 06:19:26 UTC

Wow, that is outstandingly hot, maybe the hottest masturbation story I've ever read. But it's more than just hot. First, there's Ray's almost palpable presence...guh. Fraser feeling Ray's hand on him, hours after the fact, and noticing the feeling of Ray's genitals against his buttocks...yeeeeow!

Second, there's Fraser holding it off till he finishes work (and he totally would do that).

Third and most of all, there's the last line, and that makes this more than a PWP. It makes me shiver to think Fraser's going to risk his life just for an innocent touch from Ray. Dear God...I hope Fraser accidentally gives himself away before that happens and his luck runs out.

Lovely language here especially: he's coming, sweet merciful Christ, he's coming, Ray's name tangled with the Lord's on his lips.

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders whitepuppy June 10 2006, 09:59:31 UTC

Very HOT! This story reminds me the scene of Chasing Rainbows.Love suspenders!

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders mmmchelle June 10 2006, 13:58:35 UTC

When you said this was hot, you weren't exagerrating. All that self-denial and teasing are very erotic.

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders treetracer June 10 2006, 15:22:11 UTC

I'm not even *in* this fandom, but that? Was scorching!

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders malnpudl June 15 2006, 23:47:26 UTC

Thank you! When it works even though it's outside your fandoms, that's enormously flattering. I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

Re: Suspense, Due South, Fraser (solo sex), suspenders shoemaster June 11 2006, 19:20:46 UTC

Oh guh. I'm just going to sit here all incoherent like for the next 15 minutes.

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