Wow...still so beautifully written. I like how Jenny asked Emma 'how she knew' It's like Jenny needs to be re-affirmed(?)It feels like she wants to know if she's still worth Emma's love. And the answer is perfect 'You became a part of me' How true and it explains how Emma knows what to do & when, because she feels Jenny's pain. And is doing what she needs to help her love through. Sigh.....perfect as always. All these little moments between them. Patiently waiting for more. =)
Another beautiful chapter. Oh, Jenny... she's struggling with her self worth and sees herself as more of a hinderance to Emma and someone unworthy of her love when really, she's very much deserving and worthy of it. I love how Emma confirms it. Not only with what she says but also with her actions. She knows Jenny so well that her intuition lets her know the perfect things to say and do at the right time. I love that she never asks Jenny 'what's wrong?' or tries to comfort her with 'everything will be okay'. Their relationship is so far beyond that and that's why I love this couple and the way you write them. Emma never pushes, just assures Jenny that she'll always be there for her. I hope dinner with the family will help lift Jenny's spirits and clear some of the fog
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I don’t think Emma’s mother will have a name. If she didn’t get one until now, I’ll let you chose your own name for her. Her character never fit a name I could come up with...sometimes they're stubborn like that.
Thank you for the wonderful things you wrote up there. I rather hate ‘what’s wrong’ and ‘everything will be okay’, so I guess that’s the perk of writing the scene yourself. You can make the characters cooler than that. Oh, AB, what ever will I do without your comments when this story reaches its end? ;)
Thanks to one of my friends remind me that I should leave comment, in order to let those writers know that; I did read your fic and they are all with beautiful writing, and being taking very good care of how the story goes! I am thankful to have read all the great works!! Thank you very much!
Wow! Have I ever told you how much I love the way you write? It's simply exquisite! I love how Emma is simply there for Jenny through all the tough times she has to endure and I'm sure their love will get them through anything that comes their way in the future. <3
I do hope that you’re that one anon that always leaves the kindest messages here. I’m rather fond of that anon. You are a magnificent commenter. Thank you so much for this. You always make me smile. :)
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July 24 2014, 17:02:39 UTC
Teehee, I don't know if I am the kind anon that you are referring to. I am just telling the truth, I really love the way you write and I hope you make Jenny feel better soon. <3
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Sigh.....perfect as always. All these little moments between them.
Patiently waiting for more. =)
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The next part is already written. Hopefully I’ll get it here soon.
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Thank you for the wonderful things you wrote up there. I rather hate ‘what’s wrong’ and ‘everything will be okay’, so I guess that’s the perk of writing the scene yourself. You can make the characters cooler than that. Oh, AB, what ever will I do without your comments when this story reaches its end? ;)
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Carry on Owl Wishes, you magnificent writer <3
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