Fic: When Temptation Comes

[owens_mom]

Title: When Temptation Comes
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[aquila_star]

Oh. oh.

Oh, Harry. When Draco looked at him my chest hurt. Really hurt. And it was already aching by that point. My heart is calling out for reconciliation, but in the meantime you truly deserve your QDC love. *snuggles you and cries on your shoulder*

[owens_mom]

Yeah. Mine too. Those boys. I love my QDC.
Just wait for the next part.
*grins maniacally*
*pats your shoulder*

[aquila_star]

Oooh, the next pat. *dies* Should I have a chat with your beta?? *waggles brows at Moony* or do I suck up to you?? *waggles brows at you*

Lovely, I can't wait!

[owens_mom]

It is actually ready to post. But there is a cookie for the end, to revive you all, which is still at the beta. You might not want to read it anyway. Remember how I said I find myself laughing when there is something painfully delicious? Yeah, I was giggling as I made her changes. So fucked up.

[mama_rana]

Awww, that was so good. I love Harry's private gesture. *sigh*
This phrase made me laugh: "importer/exporter". *laffs* Why does this phrase bring to mind Seinfeld?! :D I can't wait for the next installment. ;)

[owens_mom]

Yeah, I liked that too. :-) I was totally doin' Seinfeld when I wrote that. It took all my self restraint not to call it Vandalay Industries.

[mama_rana]

*cackles* That would have been great!!!

[fidelius28]

Erm, somehow I missed part 2, so I fixed that!

This hurt, but I'm a moody hormonal mess, just what I needed.

He told everyone that he had moved on. He knew in his heart it wasn’t true in the least.
*sniffles*

...so with a shuddering breath Harry leaned back slightly on his stool, placing his left hand on his chest. Draco's eyes widened slightly in recognition of the private gesture Harry had often used as a way to say I love you to Draco whenever they were in public. Harry saw Draco blink, swallow, and then drop his eyes to the floor before turning to walk outside.
Wow, just wow.

And I have to ask, was Trevor's name selected deliberately?

[owens_mom]

Not deliberate, no, though now I realize it is the name of Neville's toad, eh? LOL I just write whatever name pops into my head, usually it sticks.
Sorry you are a moody hormonal mess. *hugs you* I'm always that way, thats how I write this shit! LOL

[aquila_star]

OM, I think you are a closet Candian. Seriously, with all the love of Canadian music (we are awfully good at it) and now I see you typing, not just saying, but typing the word 'eh.' Honestly. You need to come live up here with me! I'll buy you an Iced Capp!! *tempts you with Tim Horton's goodness*

[owens_mom]

Love your icon! So, Ms. Canadian, do you know what the title of part 4 will be, based on the titles of parts 1-3?
Dh and I went to Victoria to see Great Big Sea like 6 or 7 years ago, and for fun we went to Canadian Tire and bought shit. I so miss getting CBC. :-(

[owens_mom]

I'm so glad. I love when I'm in the mood for it and it just hurts. Yay.

So, if you are still in the mood check back tomorrow when I post the next bit. I think it might hurt worse.

Love the pirates there, btw.

[scrtkpr]

I'm loving this! Thanks for writing more. :) Can't wait to read the last part!

[owens_mom]

I'm glad you like it!
Check back friday for the final installment...
*cue dramatic music*