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Oct 03, 2006 10:00

Title: Luck
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fic, h/d

Comments 36

twistedm October 3 2006, 17:22:51 UTC

i love it! great premise, tight writing, nice links to canon.

now we just need 100 words for his 21st birthday!!

owens_mom October 3 2006, 17:32:19 UTC

The mere thought of 100 words makes my eyes cross. : )

twistedm October 3 2006, 17:49:54 UTC

that difficult, eh? do you think it was a good writing exercise? maybe i should try it...

owens_mom October 3 2006, 17:52:46 UTC

I had a fair bit of trouble, at least getting it started. I actually hit my stride halfway through, Moony could totally see it, and I had to re-do a lot of the first bits.

Sometimes things just flowed and they'd be like 89 words and then I could just flesh it out. Then other times I'd have 140 words and really struggle to break it all down to its essence. It was a good exercise though. I've been working on it for a couple months! It was way easier to write Harry cheating on Draco... LOL

ravenna_c_tan October 3 2006, 17:54:26 UTC

Absolutely brilliant! Each drabble is excellently crafted, and the arc that puts them together divine.

owens_mom October 3 2006, 17:56:38 UTC

Yay! Thank you. *blushes*

luckyrory7 October 3 2006, 18:12:43 UTC

See, I have a problem with this.

It isnt long enough. I like it too much for such an ending to satisfy me. I am a wide ocean of longing for more.

To sum up, great job!

owens_mom October 3 2006, 19:25:46 UTC

Oh wow, thanks! It is plenty long enough for me, I couldn't get this thing done and posted fast enough! LOL For now I leave the follow up smut in the capable hands of people such as yourself. :D

aquila_star October 3 2006, 19:15:01 UTC

Lovely. I really liked the format, and the glimpses we get into Draco. I really liked the wanking bit, Draco's lie made me grin.

I agree though, it's too short! *winks* then again, isn't it alway? Why else would we read and write fanfic? *laughs*

Well done, again. *gives you a cookie*

owens_mom October 3 2006, 19:27:51 UTC

Yeah, Granger. As if. LOL That idea actually sparked the whole thing. Thanks for the praise, and the cookie, both are always appreciated. : )

aquila_star October 3 2006, 19:48:09 UTC

Yeah, Granger. As if. LOL

Oop, don't say that where clio214 can hear!! *laughs*

You're welcome.

catsintheattic October 3 2006, 20:37:16 UTC

hope it works.

It worked! I really like the outcome. :-)

owens_mom October 3 2006, 22:56:57 UTC

I'm so glad! Thanks for reading it. : )