i loved a lot of the dialogue, and remus getting tonks drunk so he could get her to elope? too freaking great.
one teensy thing, i think the word is "rapport", not "rapore", but please look that one up.
want to end by saying i always love it when the boys get together in the end. can you please now go write the next section where they get a hotel room and shag each other senseless?! please?!
Too right, you are. Weird, that Word had no problem with repore, and when I went to look it up at dictionary.com it said it didn't exist. Hm. Stupid Microsoft.
I love stoner!draco too. Heh. I did go to Humboldt State, after all.
Ah, the next step... people are going to stop reading my stuff because I always end it before the good stuff. How about a hearty "I'll try!"
can you please now go write the next section where they get a hotel room and shag each other senseless?! please?! I heartily second that emotion!
Some of my favorite lines:
He was still a bit disconcerted at the fact that his supply of weed came from Neville Longbottom, but Draco had to give him credit, the man sure had a way with plants
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Thank you so much, an I'm glad to see I'm not the only one that pulls their favorite lines out of fics! LOL I tinkered with this one for what seemed like ever, so I'm glad it all worked out, made sense, and that it was funny and sweet, not intense and angsty, like the other stuff that seems to come out of me most of the time.
Okay, everyone close your eyes, and imagine them going back to Harry's hotel room. Commence smut.
AAARRRRGGGGGGHHHH!!!!! I suspect this means I should not expect a sequel. *sobs* It's just that you write the non-smut so well; I know your smut would be wonderful as well. Thanks for writing back! *goes off to look for your other fics (although I will be wary, since I am a fluff-lover)*
Oh, I so love this fic. I really like what you did with that section, it flows ever so nicely. I love how Remus is the voice in Draco's head, it's very appropriate that it's him. I really love your Remus, I've told you before, but I also wanted to add that their friendship feels very real, natural. Well done.
Oh, and stoner!Draco is excellent, it's a weakness I share with him. *winks* I love He hit the roof well before sunset that night. Perfect. And this, "Sounds like someone is taking a crash course in the patented Harry Potter School of Idiot Speak." Bwahahahahahaha, it cracked me up everytime I read it (and there were a few times! ;)) All in all, I loved it. Sweet and satisfying.*sighs*
What I want to know is, how did all of us, Word included, miss rapport?? *facepalm*
*grins* This was cute, and funny. I think all my fave lines have already been quoted, so I won't try and scour for more. smut!sequel would be great, but leaving it up to the imagination isn't a horrible thing either. If you do write the sequel, mind, let us know ;)
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i loved a lot of the dialogue, and remus getting tonks drunk so he could get her to elope? too freaking great.
one teensy thing, i think the word is "rapport", not "rapore", but please look that one up.
want to end by saying i always love it when the boys get together in the end. can you please now go write the next section where they get a hotel room and shag each other senseless?! please?!
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I love stoner!draco too. Heh. I did go to Humboldt State, after all.
Ah, the next step... people are going to stop reading my stuff because I always end it before the good stuff. How about a hearty "I'll try!"
*grins sheepishly*
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But do try, and let me pre-read! ::evilgrin::
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I heartily second that emotion!
Some of my favorite lines:
He was still a bit disconcerted at the fact that his supply of weed came from Neville Longbottom, but Draco had to give him credit, the man sure had a way with plants ( ... )
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Thank you so much, an I'm glad to see I'm not the only one that pulls their favorite lines out of fics! LOL I tinkered with this one for what seemed like ever, so I'm glad it all worked out, made sense, and that it was funny and sweet, not intense and angsty, like the other stuff that seems to come out of me most of the time.
Okay, everyone close your eyes, and imagine them going back to Harry's hotel room. Commence smut.
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I suspect this means I should not expect a sequel.
*sobs*
It's just that you write the non-smut so well; I know your smut would be wonderful as well.
Thanks for writing back!
*goes off to look for your other fics (although I will be wary, since I am a fluff-lover)*
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Oh, and most of it is still fluffy, by the end. Just avoid Significance. Right.
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You said you couldn't do funny? I loved these lines:
"“Subtlety, thy name is Draco,” Remus chided him fondly.
“Cluelessness, thy name is Harry,” Draco pointed out with a mock-serious nod. "
"Just … be normal, for Merlin’s sake, would you? Strike up a conversation over the melons …”
Draco playing with his ring is a wonderful, my husband does the same when on edge. Made this all the more real for me!
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; P
Thanks, I guess there were some funny bits. : )
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Oh, and stoner!Draco is excellent, it's a weakness I share with him. *winks* I love He hit the roof well before sunset that night. Perfect.
And this, "Sounds like someone is taking a crash course in the patented Harry Potter School of Idiot Speak." Bwahahahahahaha, it cracked me up everytime I read it (and there were a few times! ;))
All in all, I loved it. Sweet and satisfying.*sighs*
What I want to know is, how did all of us, Word included, miss rapport?? *facepalm*
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I like the "he hit the roof well before sunset" line too. Bad day, that one.
And I'm so pleased you love my Remus, because, well, I could have pulled him off way wrong, yeah?
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What? Wanker isn't in the dictionary? lolio I added it to mine too! ;)
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*looks shifty*
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