Restless Nights

Nov 12, 2007 06:36

Title: Restless Nights
Author: Outsidethebx
Fandom: Bad Girls
Pairing: Helen/Nikki
Prompt: I wrote this for passion_perfect, in response to the 5,000 Challenge
Rating: PG-13
AN: Little more angst than I normally write. I was sorta in that "mood."
Archiving: Sure
Disclaimer: I have no ownership of Bad Girls

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ariestess November 12 2007, 12:27:46 UTC
*heh* That was fun!

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outsidethebx November 12 2007, 13:21:17 UTC
*g* thanks!

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xclairedelune November 12 2007, 14:53:28 UTC
Nice...good constant progression and interplay between thought and reality....
Nice understated ending..

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outsidethebx November 12 2007, 22:03:17 UTC
Thanks! :-)

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redsnake05 November 12 2007, 19:41:18 UTC
I really enjoyed this. It was so mundane but full of longing at the same time.

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outsidethebx November 12 2007, 22:01:41 UTC
Thank you. I was in an odd mood while writing it, but very glad you enjoyed it.

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wolfemeister November 12 2007, 21:52:35 UTC
That was very sweet. I'd love to see the potting shed scene.

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outsidethebx November 12 2007, 22:02:44 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked it. If you check my LJ, there are several drabbles and a few fics written about the infamous potting shed.

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sr_m_grammatica November 12 2007, 23:28:49 UTC
Nice story, my child. And congratulations upon using the past participle of the verb "to sneak" correctly, i. e., "sneaked." So many people use "snuck," which makes Sister's teeth hurt.

Well done.

Good day and good grammar,

Sister Mary Grammatica, SGJ

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outsidethebx November 13 2007, 13:08:38 UTC
Thank you, sister, for the compliments. "Snuck" annoys me, and I'm glad the proper usage garnered a blessing from you. :-)

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