Change Storm

[out_totheblack]

Clinging green fog rolled through the city streets.  Low-lying, it blended with the dirt and grime of the road.  A tall, well-dressed man pulled a foot back, gasped, and flung his arm across the door barring another from stepping out.  They backed a pace as the fog licked over the lintel careful not to let it touch them.

“How far does it go,”

Comments

[ex_naomi_ja]

To the west, lightning ripped across the sky illuminating a massive storm front. Within it, flashes like distant echoes sent jagged bolts of color crashing into the ground filling the night with an acrid smell.

My favourite bit :) Very cool!

[out_totheblack]

Thanks.

I wonder if I should make a post summing up this world. Is it being confusing?

[ex_naomi_ja]

Well, for me, I quite like uncovering new bits and pieces as you post new sections. But it would be quite cool to see a quick overview and fill in some gaps!

[out_totheblack]

I'll do that.

Re: maybe under the lintel... or over the threshold?

[out_totheblack]

Ah, yes. You're right. I thought I had the right word, but lintel is at the top and threshold is on the bottom.

Thanks.

[bogwitch64]

Well, I guess I'm REAL GLAD those don't occur on earth! Ha!

[out_totheblack]

No, doubt.

[mongrelheart]

Wow, very cool! I love the idea of a storm of magic.

[out_totheblack]

Oooo, love that icon. Very appropriate.