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justbreathe80 in out_of_con_txt

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Jun 17, 2006 09:06

A Fair Fight
F/K/V, NC-17, 1205 words

Prompt 11: "Fraser, you want to give me back my gun now?"
for lordessrenegade

A million thanks to secret_garden for the rockin' beta from half way across the world, and for letting me steal Velma.

( Velma came back with a gigantic stuffed wolf, of all things, smiling at Ray and Fraser. “Here you go, mister,” she said, with a wink and a smile. )

ficlet, fraser/kowalski/vecchio

Comments 19

visionshadows June 17 2006, 16:20:08 UTC

Guh. Just. Yeah.

Car!sex is the BEST.

justbreathe80 June 17 2006, 16:42:09 UTC

Thank you kindly! I'm glad you enjoyed it. *g*

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justbreathe80 June 18 2006, 03:02:43 UTC

YAY! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it, dear! *beams*

shoemaster June 18 2006, 06:02:03 UTC

“No,” Fraser said, his voice breaking, just a little. “At least I didn’t think so.” ZOMG so ded.

Just guh so damn hot.

justbreathe80 June 18 2006, 22:14:33 UTC

YAY! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. *beams*

xenocrate June 18 2006, 10:23:48 UTC

Fun! The premise is great, I like that first paragraph so much.

Even though I don't know what a funnel cake is.

*goes off to google*

justbreathe80 June 18 2006, 22:15:56 UTC

Thank you! I was trying to figure out how to work a gun into things without it being work-related, and brooklinegirl helped me come up with the concept. I'm glad you liked it!

Funnel cake is a doughy, yummy fried thing covered in powdered sugar that you pretty much only ever eat at a fair or carnival. YUM. *g*

akite June 18 2006, 11:56:48 UTC

Yay, car sex! And I have the perfect icon to go with the story. *g*

justbreathe80 June 18 2006, 22:16:20 UTC

YES! I *heart* your icon!

Thank you kindly.