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Shut Your Eyes - Chapter 8

Nov 21, 2010 14:40

Title: Shut Your Eyes
Authors: goten0040 and garnetice
Chapter: 8
Rating: M
Ship(s): Kendall/James, Carlos/Stephanie, maybe more.
Summary: Future!Fic. Kendall returns to L.A. six years after Big Time Rush disbanded. James has been missing for years. Imagine how things change when James reappears in his life. And he needs help.
Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7

( Drugs alwasy seemed pointless. )

!fic: shut your eyes

Comments 3

phantompearl November 21 2010, 22:23:10 UTC

Aww, hope things take a positive turn in the next chapter. <3

goten0040 November 21 2010, 22:25:31 UTC

Well, I've already written and... well... no. Not really. Hahaha

stttmsbwa November 23 2010, 06:14:00 UTC

THIS. Can I just say that this fic consumed my brain for about 36 hours? I started reading it last night and had to stop and come back a lot of times in between, but I COULDN'T STOP COMING BACK.

I'm not usually a fan of first-person point-of-views, but this one is so good. Kendall's mindset is so relatable and real and him. I love feeling and hearing his voice throughout the story.

And the rest of the characters -- I love the realistic touch this fic has, how each character has changed and not changed and moved on and not moved on.

I'm loving the Kendall/James potential in all of this, too. And how Logan still has feelings for Camille. And how Carlos is married and about to be a father. Life moves quickly like that, doesn't it?

Everything about this fic had me following with baited breath. Kendall's perceptions and thoughts and actions had me itching to scroll down. This story is just so captivating and mesmerizing.

I cannot, cannot wait for more, you guys. Awesome work, seriously. &hearts